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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 1:44 pm
The first draft of a song I'm writing.
"Black and white hearts are beating I can hear them around me Covered eyes avoid my gaze and in the haze I realize that I am free
Pretty puppets dance but I see the strings I wonder what it would be like To live a life and not feel the stings Of pain
I’m lost in the ever changing tide Yet always remaining by your side In a place that you can’t feel Stumble into this world of mine And drift into the night sky Oh you’ll never know I’ll see you in eternity Eternity’s rain, my love
Feel the slicing wind across your cheek A malicious blade of arctic air Does it remind you of anything? Of how we used to never care?
I remember the days, called childhood When the lies couldn’t touch us Do you recall how everything seemed good? I can’t
I’m lost in the ever changing tide Yet always remaining by your side In a place that you can’t feel Stumble into this world of mine And drift into the night sky Ohh you’ll never know I’ll see you in eternity In the rain
But baby we’re separated by the gravity I can’t love you, you can’t love me And all these rules are beating on my back I hope you still remain so close to me A blazing fire overtaking desire in my soul
I’m lost in the ever changing tide Yet always remaining by your side In a place that you can’t feel Stumble into this world of mine And drift into the night sky Ohh you’ll never know I’ll see you in eternity
Oh how we dance in eternity’s rain"
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:30 pm
That...was...so...good. BRILLIANCE IN THE MAKING!!!!! The thing was I could sort of feel it. Like alot of stuf people right has n meaning or anything but that had real feeling.
way to go Sachi ^_^!!!
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Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:46 pm
Thank you!! heart *glomps* Glad you joined, too. Well, technically I made you, but y'know... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:44 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 8:32 am
Thank you! whee It still needs a ton of work, though, and I don't like it too much anymore. Most of my lyrics are ideas in the making, and I never seem to finish any actual songs sweatdrop
I need to find a band, heheh ^^;
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