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Sachi_x
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 1:44 pm


The first draft of a song I'm writing.

"Black and white hearts are beating
I can hear them around me
Covered eyes avoid my gaze and in the haze
I realize that I am free

Pretty puppets dance but I see the strings
I wonder what it would be like
To live a life and not feel the stings
Of pain

I’m lost in the ever changing tide
Yet always remaining by your side
In a place that you can’t feel
Stumble into this world of mine
And drift into the night sky
Oh you’ll never know
I’ll see you in eternity
Eternity’s rain, my love

Feel the slicing wind across your cheek
A malicious blade of arctic air
Does it remind you of anything?
Of how we used to never care?

I remember the days, called childhood
When the lies couldn’t touch us
Do you recall how everything seemed good?
I can’t

I’m lost in the ever changing tide
Yet always remaining by your side
In a place that you can’t feel
Stumble into this world of mine
And drift into the night sky
Ohh you’ll never know
I’ll see you in eternity
In the rain

But baby we’re separated by the gravity
I can’t love you, you can’t love me
And all these rules are beating on my back
I hope you still remain so close to me
A blazing fire overtaking desire in my soul

I’m lost in the ever changing tide
Yet always remaining by your side
In a place that you can’t feel
Stumble into this world of mine
And drift into the night sky
Ohh you’ll never know
I’ll see you in eternity

Oh how we dance in eternity’s rain"
PostPosted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:30 pm


That...was...so...good. BRILLIANCE IN THE MAKING!!!!! The thing was I could sort of feel it. Like alot of stuf people right has n meaning or anything but that had real feeling.

way to go Sachi ^_^!!!

stupidskankbitch69


Sachi_x
Captain

PostPosted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:46 pm


Thank you!! heart *glomps* Glad you joined, too. Well, technically I made you, but y'know... sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:44 pm


~cries~
"I LOVE IT!!!!

[sai-kun]


Sachi_x
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 8:32 am


Thank you! whee It still needs a ton of work, though, and I don't like it too much anymore. Most of my lyrics are ideas in the making, and I never seem to finish any actual songs sweatdrop

I need to find a band, heheh ^^;
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