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He watched her sitting underneath the cherry blossom tree, her hair matching the slowly falling petals. She was slowly nodding off to sleep, and then he would make his move. When she was asleep he would lie with her until just before she woke up. He always did this. Every day at 5:00 AM she would come out here and sleep. He never understood why she did this he just knew she did and that he wanted to be with her when she was here. She was so beautiful as she lay there, the sun slowly rising illuminating her beautiful face. Her eyes were finally closed, her breathing gently blowing her bangs. He lept from his perch and stepped closer to his sleeping angel. She did not stir as he approached, just lay there gently breathing. He sat down next to her, letting his hand brushing her cheek ever so lightly. Her head shook a little and he prepared to run, but before he could even move her hand shot out gripping his wrist. Her eyes snapped open and she stared at him confused "Gaara?" she said confused. He was terrified; she couldn't know he was here it just couldn't happen. "Gaara...you weren't here the whole time I was sitting here were you?" Gaara couldn't speak; he'd been discovered and he couldn't confess his...was it love? He couldn't tell. All he knew was that he didn't want her to hate him...he wanted to be with her as long as she slept. "Gaara please speak," she said with a pained look in her eyes. He stared deep into her beautiful green eyes, "Don't hate me," was all he could say, then he pressed his lips to hers. She seemed shocked but then relaxed into the kiss and pulled him closer. Finally they broke apart and she smiled at him, blushing. Upon realizing what he had just done he pulled his arm free and ran. "Wait!" she yelled, but it was too late...he was gone. He jumped through the trees infuriated with himself. "You just had to kiss her didn't you?" he thought angrily to himself, "now she will hate you for sure." But somehow he didn't really regret it. His fingers touched his lips "I finally kissed you my beautiful sakura blossom," he said as a smile broke across his flower touched lips.

I agree with Sachi; it doesn't sound like the main point to start on, and if it is you started too late and moved too soon. Also, there is a way to be romantic (or whatever it is) without being cliched, so you'd best aim for that area.