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I don't think my writing is mature enough, I mean I have ok ideas but horrible grammer, spelling, all of that and sometimes I miss out on important detail. Do you have any tips on improving my writing skills?

Oh, that is what I have been doing. emo

I thought punctuation goes inside quotes??

Well, if you're having issues with grammar, it isn't that big of a deal. Just write everything out, then get someone to proofread it. They'll point out the mistakes and tell you if you should change something that's unclear or something. If you're too focused on the grammar, chances are that the writing won't turn out as well. ^^; Plus, if you pay close attention to the critiques, then you'll eventually just be able to use that when you're writing without thinking too much about it.

Hmm, well, I've always been pretty good at grammar. What you need to do is write what's on your mind, and go over it again and again. Is there anything missing? What is it? You must ask yourself these questions in order to create the correct amount of detail in your work.

I agree.

If you're good at them then how come you can't spell grammar right? xd

I agree heartily with everyone on the Spellcheck. It just isn't reliable at all, particularly with grammar. I also say that you should just keep reading and writing. After all, you know what you want to write, so you can write it, even if it takes a while. Leave it alone for a few days, and then reread it. You'll always find more mistakes that ways, and therefore better your writing. And if you read more as well, then you will become familiar with how other writers use grammar, and how they spell certain words can sometimes stick out in your memory. At least, that's what I think of it.