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An Ode to Horses..C+C please (even if you don't like Horses)

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Aqua-Lamb

PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:23 pm


I took a bunch of pictures I found on google and made an Ode, it isn't very good without the pictures, and I hope this isn't plagerism because I am not taking any credit for the photos, I am only taking credit for the words that are there.


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photoless ode:

Horses..They soar; They brighten the land.

They trot upon the air between Their Hooves and the unworthy ground.

Not even the sun could compare to Them; They are noble.

They show the humans that color doesn't matter.

They romp, They frolic.

They resemble the beautiful starry night sky, They complete the ocean, The pastel sky would not be near as beautiful without Them....

They are Horses, They are Beautiful, They inspire.

They Come From...


All over the world...

And where...

Would we be...


Without Them?
PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:25 pm


kool
itd be better if it wasnt done on paint tho lol you need another editing program where you can make the font bigger and have it faded into the picture

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Aqua-Lamb

PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:28 pm


Youma Yanagi
kool
itd be better if it wasnt done on paint tho lol you need another editing program where you can make the font bigger and have it faded into the picture
yeah well, mspaint is he best i can do, and besides..i didnt take the pictures, i'm asking for crit on the ode and the way the pictures fit the words very well, like when it says "..Not even the sun could compare to Them.." the horse is almost the color of the sun, golden and bright like the sun is
PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:42 pm


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Youma Yanagi
kool
itd be better if it wasnt done on paint tho lol you need another editing program where you can make the font bigger and have it faded into the picture
yeah well, mspaint is he best i can do, and besides..i didnt take the pictures, i'm asking for crit on the ode and the way the pictures fit the words very well, like when it says "..Not even the sun could compare to Them.." the horse is almost the color of the sun, golden and bright like the sun is
Paints all ive got too but i no how to work around with it lol

its a good poem either way

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Aqua-Lamb

PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:15 pm


thanks but it isnt a poem, it's an ode (theres a difference to me)
PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 8:17 pm


in all honestly nothing is different everything is the same lol

Real life and the wired its all the same

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Dr Cotton

PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2007 6:11 pm


I thought the ode was beautiful and you picked perfect pictures to go with them.

But you know you can download the GIMP for free. Its pretty much the same thing as photoshop.
PostPosted: Thu May 31, 2007 3:15 pm


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I thought the ode was beautiful and you picked perfect pictures to go with them.

But you know you can download the GIMP for free. Its pretty much the same thing as photoshop.
I probably could...But I'm probably toolazy to do so xd

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PostPosted: Sun May 17, 2009 9:16 pm


my favorite line is "They show the humans that color doesn't matter. "
that's a good one.
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