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 Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:19 pm
When i spoke to you last
it seemed like everything was in the past
but not everything
one thing remained
and i didnt mean to do this to you
so what must i do
to get this throught to you
Im sorry for everything ive done
Im sorry none of it was fun
Im sorry can you forgive me
so that we can move on
it was only yesterday when it happen
life was cool and every1 was laughin
but then something happen that we could not forget
we just kissed for a little bit
but now everyone knows
and even though it's public news
someone learned that i hoped wouldnt learn about it
and now to gain the trust back
i must say this as many times as possible...
Im sorry for everything ive done
Im sorry none of it was fun
Im sorry can you forgive me
Im sorry i didnt tell you
Im sorry i didnt no what to do
Im sorry can you forgive me
so that we may move on
the only way to get through this
is to make up our minds here and now
we must be true to our hearts and mind
so that this can be settled and over....
Im sorry for everything ive done
Im sorry none of it was fun
Im sorry can you forgive me
Im sorry i didnt tell you
Im sorry i didnt no what to do
Im sorry can you forgive me
so that we may move on
Im sorry....
Im sorry....
IM... SOR...RRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:35 am
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hardkoreUSMC Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:52 am
Cool man, what kinda genre would this be sung/played in?
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:01 pm
its gonna sung...like soft rock
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hardkoreUSMC Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 11:24 am
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 6:50 pm
I liked this one too! But I hafta say, that short poem... or was it a ballad...? That you wrote is by far my favorite from ya! I don't know, just the way it flowed and the emotion in it...
I loved this one too, though!! biggrin
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 9:19 pm
Really nice, lengthy and meaningful. I'd say this is a great one my friend. Well done.
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