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One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 5:00 pm


Well, here, I shall post my works. I'll try and keep it within a reasonable font size, as to not be so hard on my new friend's eyes. I speak of the readers of course. But I will post my poems on here as they come, I will put a few on here right now for all of you to read. I hope that you enjoy.

Also, please know that I do not write to impress, I write for the joy of it. It is one of the few ways that my soul may speak plainly without being judged. So if you DO criticize, please be kind and courteous. Thank you.


Poem #1

I've not the ability to deal with this,
So it seems my life is marked for haunt,
My words are marked by deaf,
Any my mind with terror,

I try so hard to get it all out,
But still, your ears are deaf,
Yet still, your eyes are blind,

For they do not wish to see,
The Pain and Suffering of Your's Truly,



Poem #2

My hopes and my dreams have all but left me,
Yet still I dwell on the fact that I live,
Taking every day with shattered disregard,
And prayer of simplicity to come to me,
To take complexity, and mold it to fit,
For my life is that of nothing,
A black rose, among a sea of white,
The purity of my previous mind,
Taken by the black of a single day,
I take no comfort in knowing I shall not wake up,
From a tortured existence of regret,
But then wait, I have all of you,
I have your minds, your hearts, and ears,
How then can I not take comfort?
My cohorts have left me, back to shadow,
For my friends have come to be from the heavens above,
I do not know how, they've managed to come,
By the rain of the heavens, or by the prayer of me,
I do know that they're here,
And I do know that they fear,
For everyone has, times in their life,
To which they write every single line,
To reflect their days, hour by hour,
Every moment, taken in stride,
For the pointless day, is soon to end,
And bring about, a new existence,
And show us the happiness that we've all but lost,
And renew that which was taken from us,
We, your children, ask for guidance,
In this a pale time in our lives,
Take us away, far away.


Poem #3

All in all, beauty will fade,
Your actions, your quotes, and the face you made,

But your mind and your thoughts, will last forever,
So know this here, it's now or never,

To take that person, and make them your own,
Their attention, and yours, you'd be sure to loan,

And captivate them, and show them you,
You shall see, your relationship renew,

To something more, then just friend,
And show them love, no one could send,

Keep them yours for all your lives,
A love which could be cut by no knives,

For external entities can not harm,
Your love will be true, and give you alarm,

A love so strong, no one could break,
A love so strong, no one could make,

It is here, before your eyes,
So see where, your allegiance lies,

With your mind, and with your heart,
Or do you wish to be a work of art?



Poem #4

Such passion is the feeling of my heart,
Whilst I look upon a beauty, a work of art,

Only in dreams and in books, do you so show,
And I have read each of them, fantastical no?

Yet still I look upon the ground pondering,
I watch in confusion, while my feet move, sauntering,

I walk upon this world thinking only of you,
Your beauty, your laugh, and your voice too,

Please, come with me, and be mine,
Be my love, and we will be fine,

I will treat you as a Goddess,
As long as you aren't so modest,

Do not be fooled, for you are perfection,
God has done well in creating this reflection,

I speak of the world, such a wonderful thing,
Causes the heart, and mind to sing,

But you see, I now know,
That the world is an unworthy foe,

For even though it was modeled after you,
There is no comparison, when we are two,

Nothing can take my eyes away,
Whenever I wait, and hear you say,

"I love you."



Poem #5
Never sweeter have these halls been,
Filled with happy, women and men,
That legendary scent, that of rose,
Removes all sorrow, all hate, and all foes,
That delicate flower, and its marvelous petals,
I love to watch and see as it settles,
This single symbol of love and more,
Has influenced people, greater then ever before,
It drives people to do such wild things,
But then who wouldn't? When your heart sings?
Such a wonderful thing,
To make one's heart sing,
And all of this, for one thing or two,
It doesn't matter, as hearts re-new,
I love it all, this much is true,
I can only imagine, if we were two.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:19 pm


I think you, my friend, are a geinous. Even if I dont know how to spell it, or I think its spelled wrong, at least. You still are.

You blow me away <3

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One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:21 pm


Uh...is that a good thing? Haha, and it's genius. But thank you for the thought. I think that I am only decent. I wouldn't say Genius haha, but thank you my friend.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:23 pm


Meh, It's better than anything I could EVER do, so yah, I'd consider that.... that word XD Erm... Genius.

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One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:23 pm


Haha, well thank you for your thoughts my friend. And I think that anyone could make a work of art if only you apply your mind my friend.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:28 pm


Heh, I guess that's true, but you also have to remember. Some people just lack talent. Most have to learn it. xD Me especially.

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One Poet
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:30 pm


Nothing is worth learning or acquiring if it isn't difficult to aspire to no? Trust me my friend, with time, things become possible that you would have never thought. I'm talking like I'm a famous writer haha, my apologies, that is just my philosophy.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:56 pm


I think I'll make a new Thread every 5 poems that I poems.

One Poet
Vice Captain


undesirable_sacrifice
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:48 pm


Your work is beautiful. It may seem as if you have a lot of experience under your belt. It only shows in your poetry. Keep on writing. They truly are wonderful.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:51 pm


I'm truly glad that you enjoy them. But no, I don't have very much experience, I only have a great inspiration in my life.

I do appreciate your comments and hope to have more of my work read by you. Thank you very much.

One Poet
Vice Captain


undesirable_sacrifice
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:01 pm


Hold on to that inspiration, and never let go. It may be you are not experienced, but your words show so much. Hidden maybe, but truly inspiring.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:03 pm


This inspiration shall never slip through my fingers, for it is the love of a women. And through words can one gain experience and all things in life that drive man to motivations and inspirations.

One Poet
Vice Captain


undesirable_sacrifice
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:23 pm


That is most true. Inspiration and motivation can drive a man to great success and happiness. All it takes is something small to start out and it can grow and with it learn the experiences of a lifetime.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:36 pm


So true, see this is why I joined this guild. I prefer to speak with people such as yourself who talk how they feel. Thank you for all the conversations.

One Poet
Vice Captain


undesirable_sacrifice
Crew

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:50 pm


I'd like to thank you as well. I was a little unsure about this guild to be honest when I joined. You've made me feel like I can express how I feel and be more comfortable with my work here. Thanks.
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