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 Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:33 pm
(( Written for 3 or 4 part Harmony. Bass, Tenor, Soprano, Alto. ))
On wings of thunder, Honor bound,
Search me out, I drum this sound.
Twist and turn, In the night,
Dragon come, my guiding light.
Protector, Gaurdian, Friend not foe,
Come to me, see my sigil glow.
Strong and True, This friendship charm.
I beacon thee, protect me from harm.
Around and About your magil swirls,
Come to me your wings unfurled.
Welcome the gaurdians of ----
(Cuts off there, unfinished. Thinking of adding one or two more lines. CRITICIZE <3 )
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:35 pm
Sounds interesting, but I will be honest and say that I've not the slightest clue of how to sing that. But it sounds nice ~.^
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:37 pm
Hehe any suggestions?
... Radom thought... Im gonna make sheet music! <3
and, I think it's...
//Edit: Starting notes are Bottom Do, Mi, Sol, Top Do. For Bass, Tenor, Alto, and Soprano.\
Rythm:
|: 1, and, 2, and, 3, and 4. : |
|: <-> : | = Repeat.
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:47 pm
Umm...-Has no idea what you just said- That sounds awesome.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:10 pm
I like this style of writing better than your other style to be honest... I mean, the rhyming and the rythm to it. ^^; I hope you finish this soon! Although I cannot help you with that... XD I've never been good with helping others with their poetry... Probably because I have such a unique and different style, and I can't always adjust to the style of something someone else has written... Or stuff I started months ago and didn't finish for that matter. 3nodding But I hope you find inspiration to finish this! I look forward to it! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:13 pm
I find it best to allow one's mind to wander and create things at will, rather then attempt to cause them to veer another course.
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