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 Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:41 pm
Here I'll post spontaneous writings. It could be just a quote, a couplet that I wanted to get out. Or just anything really. Here's an example: "Whether or not, we are two,
I'll still always love you."
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:27 pm
Very nice. I like your idea of spontanious thoughts and writings. Some great writings come from it.
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undesirable_sacrifice Crew
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:32 pm
I write in nothing but spontaneous thought haha.
"If you wish to see,
The inspiration for me,
Look in the mirror, you shall see,
What has inspired your's truly."
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:01 pm
"Never has there been a sweeter sound, then the words that leave your lips,
I listen closely as I massage your soft hand, and caress it's tips,
I watch intently as you speak those undying words,
Listen as they flow through the sky, such as graceful birds,"
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:25 pm
She truly is lucky to have someone such as you to have as much love you hold for her in your words.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:37 pm
She doesn't love me back in the way that I love her. She is like my Sister, it's really complicated unfortunately.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:46 pm
Hmm. Well, that sounds all too difficult. Rather complicated I can only imagine. I am truly at a lose for words as to how to respond. I apologize if I said anything to offend you.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:50 pm
No worries my friend. I've learned to take things in stride. Please do not apologize. And do not feel obligated to respond to this haha. I do appreciate your concern however.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:20 pm
I like how you're posting spontaneous thoughts and lines here. ^^; All my best poetry comes from being so tired, that my fingers just start flying across the keyboard and suddenly I have a poem from somewhere deep in my subconscious. When I'm awake, I'll clean it up so it flows better, but not really change the lines because that would ruin the feeling to it. And it's always neat to see what I wrote in the morning. I can decipher then what was bugging me the night before... Like solving my own riddles... ^^;
Whoops. Didn't mean to direct that to me, if ya know what I mean. XD I love it... Spontaneous posts. Can't wait to read more of 'em.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:22 pm
Well thank you ^^ I'm going to post them in the first post I think...or maybe just post them haha.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:27 pm
"Through mist and snow,
I shall show,
That the strength in which,
I care shalt not flinch,
For the gleam in my eye,
Will show you no lie,
For I never wish to let go,
Even through, mist and snow."
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:35 pm
Very elegant. Your words just flow together. I must say your vocabulry is great. It just makes it worth more to read. With all the detail and wonder.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:40 pm
My diction? Hmm...interesting. Well thank you once more for your comments haha, you are always so supportive.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 6:28 pm
Haha. I love writing. It is my passion. When ever I read it I can't help but connect to it or just wonder. There is so much emotion and pure thought with poetry. I've been writing for 7 years, and still there are pieces of work that suprise me eah day. I am always eager to read more and just experience and learn how others portray their work of art so to speak.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 7:25 pm
I've only been writing for 5 years, and I can always improve. My first poem is somewhere around here...it was the first poem that I've ever written. Once I find it, I'll definately post it up here.
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