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(Red_Paint)

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 8:32 pm


Why


arrow I wrote this yesterday. When my
friend left me for her boyfriend, so I wrote
what would happen if her left her.
I wasn't mad, because they're in love
but it did hurt...
emo


Who do you think you are?
Why must you do this to me?
What thoughts are going though your head?
Where are you going to be?

How could you just leave me?
I was just standing there
Watching you walk away
The wind blowing my hair.

I fell to my knee's
My heart breaking
When you said you hated me
I thought you were faking

Soon I got up
I tried moving on
I kept saying in my heart
you couldn't really be gone...

I needed to get you back,
I wasn't going to give up easily.
I was going to find you,
I didn't want to be me.

You had my heart,
Stole it away.
That's all I thought about
On that long day.


Written By (Red_Paint)
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:55 pm


It's really good. The Rhyme is good, and the meaning behind the poem is quite emotional. Great work my friend, keep it up.

One Poet
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Lady Seinu
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 7:26 am


I liked it a lot! I had a little trouble making sense of it, but I believe that's because my sister has the TV going in the backround... sweatdrop
Hopefully your friend will realize how good of a friend you are and come back to you... I know how difficult that can be. I lost one of my best friends to a boyfriend... They're still together to this day... I think they might be engaged... But I understand how that is and if she doesn't realize how this is hurting you, then she really isn't the greatest friend. I was told this when Jessica (my friend I was talking about) and I started drifting appart... And I didn't believe it for a second. But I'm sure your friend will realize what she's losing and come back to ya. ^^; Anyway, sorry for the major paragraph. But anyway, keep up the great work!
PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 8:52 am


One Poet
It's really good. The Rhyme is good, and the meaning behind the poem is quite emotional. Great work my friend, keep it up.


Agree 3nodding

hardkoreUSMC
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