mikistarchan
we're together
but it seems lonely
i forgot the happiness
we felt long ago
now
u seem like a stranger
with no connection between us
we go our seperate ways
divide into different paths
all is peaceful
until that accident
you're into my life again
but we dont hav love
you're not my love one
I want to shout
and say
the words i've had in my mind
but i have to keep quiet
for the child
Maybe some more "fancy" words in places will emphasize the mood you are trying to convey. Like when i write my lyrics, I'm constantly thinking of synonyms, antonyms, etc. Try it out.
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