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 Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 9:23 pm
So my friend and I are writing this NaruSaku RP, and I'm having a little trouble getting into Sakura's psyche. I'm trying to portray an older Sakura, very confused and hurt with her first brush with love. XD;;
Ahh...so lame.
Anyway, it's just getting started, but I was wondering if anyone would mind reading it over and giving me some pointers?
Link is here.
Thanks. ^^;
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 6:17 pm
I think you did very well bringing out Sakura in your own way.I liked how Sasuke was still in the picture to.You discribed Sakura's emotions, and how she was feeling very vividly.You did a great job with the relationships that Sakura had with both Naruto and Sasuke.You had made it to where she still hasen't gotten over Sasuke yet.All at the same time she has great feelings for Naruto.I can't give any pointers because I see no flaw's in what you are doing.=D
The suspense.>>;
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:54 pm
NarutoAndSakura I think you did very well bringing out Sakura in your own way.I liked how Sasuke was still in the picture to.You discribed Sakura's emotions, and how she was feeling very vividly.You did a great job with the relationships that Sakura had with both Naruto and Sasuke.You had made it to where she still hasen't gotten over Sasuke yet.All at the same time she has great feelings for Naruto.I can't give any pointers because I see no flaw's in what you are doing.=D
The suspense.>>;
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 8:30 pm
This is...
*sniff*
too good to be true...
*sobs in happiness*
It's perfect-o. I don't think I can give you any advices...^.^
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 11:38 pm
cool cool very coolio smile
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 2:22 am
Yey! We're posting again if anyone's still interested! :3
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 5:33 pm
omg, i love it! I don't see anything wrong with it, just keep doing what ur doing. u have voice, so keep writing the rp! I love it
~its not lame.
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:00 pm
Naruto-Sakura_99 omg, i love it! I don't see anything wrong with it, just keep doing what ur doing. u have voice, so keep writing the rp! I love it ~its not lame.
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 3:23 pm
np! mrgreen Can't wait for the 9th page!!!!!<----are u gunna continue it?? plz plz say yes! eek
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:05 pm
Naruto-Sakura_99 np! mrgreen Can't wait for the 9th page!!!!!<----are u gunna continue it?? plz plz say yes! eek
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:28 pm
Moenokori Naruto-Sakura_99 np! mrgreen Can't wait for the 9th page!!!!!<----are u gunna continue it?? plz plz say yes! eek yay! *jumps up and down* lol, slow at posting, hehe. XD. post as slow as u want, as long as the story continues i am happy mrgreen but i get impatient sometimes. But anyway, yay! mrgreen
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