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Lung Qin Mei

Sparkly Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:17 am


Calling all writer's!
This is where you may post your work. You may post:
Quote:
Poetry, Fifty Five Fiction (questions about this? PM me), Song Lyrics, and such.


At the moment, this is rather basic. This post WILL BE UPDATED! Please continue to check it.

As always, follow ALL the rules of Gaia and of this Guild. Most of all... DO NOT STEAL ANYONE's WORK. Also, be kind. No flames, nothing horrid. Comments and constructive critisism.

Anyway... I won't have time to update this post today, I'm too busy, but feel free to being posting and sharing.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:59 am


Considering that it's a given, you don't need "Vampire Guild" in your thread titles...

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Messenger of darkness

PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 9:06 am


Here's one of mine:

When the heart is lonely and filled with despair,
Life is a poison even the air,
But when love is given and never returned,
My trust the've lost, and it can't be earned.

How many times has death smiled upon me,
Then to feel his power flowing free.
I walk and see that life's all around,
But I'm only my darkside, my light can't be found.

When they're all happy and everythings swell,
Their attitude and words will send them to hell,
And there I live, and feel the powers grow,
Then I'll lose it all and my life I must throw,
I give the life that I have earned,
So my soul is the one, the one who is burned.

These marks on my arm are not a demand,
I have made these with my own hand,
When my heart is in pain and grows more dark,
I grab my sword and draw another mark.
Some believe this leaves pain that's unwanted,
But I feel no pain because my soul is so haunted
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 10:41 am


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Ophelia Rose


Lady Mystical

PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 6:01 pm


Yay for the poetry! I would post but I have nothing of interest at the moment. *sighs*
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:18 pm


I wonder if this thread will attract anything other then Emo poetry?

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:21 pm


I wrote this about 4 years ago! Damn....

It's the witching hour, and the demon moon is trapped behind the shadows of a cloud.
The grass is soaked in dew as a lady steps out onto the field.
Blinding light shines out onto the road from a distant sign,
As a black car speeds closer.

The lady continues to walk closer to the pitch tar trail.
Too dark is the night to see her face.
A child from within the dark vehicle peers out her window,
To see the peculiar woman.

Just as the car passes in front of the mysterious nymph.
She stops at the edge of the road.
The child sees only a silhouette of this vixen,
As white clarity floods out around the figure.

The woman's face is nothing more than a void.
But too late, the moment has passed.
As the car drives on, the little girl looks back,
Only to find an empty patch of grass.

It's the concept that matters. gonk
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 9:06 pm


Talon
Considering that it's a given, you don't need "Vampire Guild" in your thread titles...


I just copy pasted the name twas given in earlier talks. I didn't have time to be creative.

Kochikens
I wonder if this thread will attract anything other then Emo poetry?


I hope so. I mean I love poetry, but I want this to be everything. Maybe I'll teach everyone to do 55 Fiction.

55 Fiction!!!!
Fifty-Five Fiction is a short short story that has all the components of any real fiction, a begining, a middle and end. It has a conflict and resolution. And most importantly this story is made with only 55 words. That's right boys and girls, fifty-five words ONLY.
They may be about anything as long as there are only 55 words.
rules:
-must have clear beginging middle and end
-most contain only 55 words
-hyphenated words like long-term are TWO WORDS because they can be spilt apart and still be words... hyphenated words like ex-girlfriend are ONE WORD because ex isn't considered a word in itsel
- With number... Fifty-five is TWO WORDS... 55 is ONE WORD!!!
- Any questions? PM me (Fayena)!!!

Lung Qin Mei

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 5:17 pm


"A Roll of the Dice"

A roll of the dice,
Full of flair and spice.
One more haughty grin,
Because you know I'm gonna win.

Lucky seven, who'd've guessed?
This is your lesson, don't deal with the best.
You come back for more, what are you a dope?
I'm sorry but for you, there just is no hope.

I turn you down, I don't want you to live in disgrace,
But you keep asking, saying that one more won't make you lose face.
You've got kids and a wife, you think I care?
Take what's left of your cash and take them to the fair.

You get down on your knees to plead and beg,
Even though we all know I'll crush you like an egg.
I give in and give you one last chance,
Knowing that this will be your one last dance.

We all listen in silence as the dice tumble in my hand,
One more toss and on lucky seven they stand.
You fall to your knees, a broken mess.
You should've listened to your ma when she told you to stick to chess.

Slowly you arise and accept your fate,
Wondering how you're going to explain to your wife why you're late.
And this is why gambling my friends,
Is the reason so many meet their ends.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 5:08 am


sits back and listens to the rymes enjoying it.

Messenger of darkness


Lung Qin Mei

Sparkly Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 7:28 am


*nods*
This is great everyone! Keep posting!
And try the Fifty-Five Fiction! I'll post one of my own soon today, hopefully I'll have time to write one... Stupid shitting homework... No school so they think hell, lets give her more then usual... Anyway, i have a few, I'll post one.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 6:54 pm


sadly i only know poems i read in books it too bad i cant post it crying

deepblue1


Lung Qin Mei

Sparkly Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 7:22 pm


Try writing your own!

Or if you do not enjoy writin poetry try a short story form called Fifty-Five Fiction.
the way to write 55Fic is in a previous post. They really are fun to someone who enjoys literary problems. I adore them. I will post some soon.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 10:38 am


Breaking my back just to know your name
Seventeen tracks and I've had it with this game
I'm breaking my back just to know your name
But heaven ain't close in a place like this
Anything goes but don't blink you might miss
Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumour ruin my moonlight

Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looks like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential

Ready? Let's roll onto something new
Taking its toll and I'm leaving without you
Ready? Let's roll onto something new
But heaven ain't close in a place like this
Anything goes but don't blink you might miss

Cause heaven ain't close in a place like this
I said heaven ain't close in a place like this
Bring it back down, bring it back down tonight
Never thought I'd let a rumour ruin my moonlight

Well somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looks like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential
A rushin', a rushin' around

Pace yourself from me
I said maybe baby please
But I just don't know now

Somebody told me
You had a boyfriend
Who looks like a girlfriend
That I had in February of last year
It's not confidential
I've got potential

I admit this is a copy right but it will help with inspiration for you peeps
the song belongs to The Killers a band

deepblue1


Lady Mystical

PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 12:57 pm


*clears her throat*
Allright Ladies and Gents, here's a little something I wrote in honor of the best darn pirate to sail the seven seas!

*giggles*
Actually it was for a class assignment..... sweatdrop but I thought I would share it anyways to lighten up the mood in here just a tad.

It's a limerick, and thusly fallows the criteria for one. Hope everyone enjoys!

Treason

The infamous Captain Jack Sparrow
Had to walk down a plank quite narrow.
His gold hungry crew
Took over it is true,
And he received not one dinero.
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