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 Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 8:53 pm
I penned this during English after I was done with a test we did today. Open for improving suggestions,and this is the second poem I've written in my life so please understand if its a bit...crude...
From dawn 'til dusk
the sun hangs in the sky
but from dusk 'til dawn
the moon rules on high
under the moonlight
the children of darkness play
and do in the moonlight
what they can't in the day
They call to the mortals
and the mortals respond
coming forth meekly is the responce
of which they're most fond
But some choose to fight
then with consiquences cope
to be drunk dry
and recovery? No hope!
Or they could be turned
forced to share the curse
so let ye foolhearty say
"Do your worst!"
*gulp* so let the reviews begin...
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 3:43 pm
I like this poem. It is very interesting and well, isquisite.
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 7:32 pm
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