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 Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 7:08 pm
Hot tears,
Growing fears,
I'm about to get hit,
but I am saved from it.
I ask "How?"
and I ask "Why?"
Some might say "Ow!" when hit,
but I cry with all my might.
Pain,sorrow,and grief
all gone from one belief.....
I'm loved.
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 8:20 pm
thats so true...you are loved by many.... im not gay but i love you in a friend kinda way though.... i would be sad without you....lol.... that wii commercials on!!*we would like to play* * holds up the wii* lol!!anyways i like that poem....can i kinda steal it from you and pass it on?lol biggrin rofl mrgreen
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 8:20 pm
I LIKE IT!! it sounds...painful yet cheerful mrgreen NICELY DONE!
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 10:05 pm
IT'S really emotional.
But u did a good job on it.
BRAVO!!
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 4:41 pm
you know i felt nothing i just read it for the hell of it. its hard to say if its good or not
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 1:39 pm
some people just dont have the touch for poetry lol i enjoy it but i could probably never write a poem though.........its ok if you dont have an opinion.....sometimes i dont either ^.^
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 6:24 pm
I get SO emotional everytime I read this. BUt it is a good piece of work..like I say U are the creative one out of all three of us. James is creative in his own way..but not that much in writing...no offense I do like his poems too now.
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