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 Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 8:14 am
heres one that i wrote a while back.
when i see you,
i want to hold you.
when i hold you,
i want to kiss you.
when i kiss you,
i pray that i have been good to you.
when you are down,
i want to give you everything.
when you are lonely,
i want to stay with you until you feel happy.
when ive done all of those things i think to myself,
have i been the man you want me to be?
have i held you tight enough?
has my kiss made all of your worries go away?
have i given you everything you wanted?
have i made you happy?
but as i look down on your beautiful face,
as you lay in my arms,
as i cradle you gently,
and wipe away a tear.
i find the answer i was looking for,
you love me as i am, and thats all i need to know.
but heres my best one its called a faded memory.its really sad.
I walk down an empty street, looking for you.
I try to call out your name, and no one answers.
I feel you drifting away like a faded memory.
I go to the park, looking, but no ones there.
I go to your favorite restaraunt, but your not there.
I look back at old places, trying to find you.
I just cant accept the fact your gone.
My heart tells me I cant give up looking.
Your the only one who could make me smile, and now that your gone, I feel so cold.
I go to the same places each day, hoping youll be there.
But deep down I know youre nothing but a faded memory.
and heres a little something chester quotes in a story of mine.
In silence i mourn for the ones that have been lost.
In darkness i cry for the souls that never rest.
In sin i feel no sorrow towards the ones that still live.
But in light i close my eyes and drive the darkness and sin away.
Away from my mind.
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 1:23 pm
that was nice! you have a sweetheart? heart
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 1:26 pm
I love the first one.You told me about the 2nd one and explained it to me.I still remember it.^.^
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 9:36 pm
thankies! blaugh yup yup, i have a sweetheart.^w^ and the second one i wrote after my grandfather died. cry
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:21 am
I LOVE THE POEMS!!!
I didn't know u were a poet at heart.
U really surprised me. I love BOTH of ur poems. I can understand the meaning very well. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 1:52 pm
well i cant write poems but i can interpret them real good.........i like them both............
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 3:39 pm
they are good i feel the same way about someone myself
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 7:58 pm
that first poem......when i see you......ive seen it before.......did YOU write it or did you COPY it?........just curious.....the name of it is WHEN I SEE YOU and i feel like that toward someone.....as a few of you already know.............
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 10:57 pm
well, i wrote it myself, unless someone copied me!!!!!!!!!!!! gonk rofl
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 10:49 am
rofl i think when people copy stuff, they should really give the creator the credit. i mean it's really rude and stuff you know?
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:22 am
i agree.........well at any rate.....if anyone asks......ill give you full credit......2 thumbs up! good job!!
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 4:29 pm
lol, you are all awesome in my book!!!!!!!!!! blaugh
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