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Lostinthenightrain

PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:16 am


Stay Strong

She smiles even when she is broken
Her eyes haunted within
Standing tall and strong
She just continues to breathe out and in

He ended up being her kryptonite
When she wanted her superman
But the cape never appeared
He just happened to be the lying man

Superman was all fake
Now she turns to her own place
Smarter now from what had happened
Her nickname should be ace

Life will continue on
So will she with her head held high
Her back straight and her eyes forward
It is her turn to say good-bye

Never even giving him a passing glance
Her feet are moving forward once again
Attractions never go father then hello
She hides from the whispers in her den

Broken and shattered she is
But she is stubborn and strong
Her tears are now stone
She will continue on for long

Friends guard her when she needs
She had the wrong man
They realize how sad she is
He was a coward and ran

Disappearing is her wish but out of the question
Her best friend tells her to stay strong
But it is so hard in the storm
This has been going on for too long

Storms pass over frequently
He stole part of her identity
Hearts stolen and misplaced
She will have to live for eternity

Haunted eyes with broken smiles
Heartache consumes her
Love for one who never returned
Unrequited love claimed her

Fighting for her heart and her life and sanity
But one day love will find her once more
Even if she has to search for it forever
She will now close the past’s door
PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:17 am


This is a poem I had just written for a friend. I would like some people's opinions please?

Lostinthenightrain

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