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 Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:28 pm
IF ONLY YOU COULD BE ME FOR A MOMENT......
Sometimes I wish you could step into my shoes
For just a little while...
To think what I think;
To see what I see:
To feel what I feel;
To understand the confusion, the fear, the admiration, and
The friendship I feel toward you....all at once.
If you were able to live inside my mind, even for a moment,
You would see that my world is
Filled with so many responsibilities,
Yet so often my thoughts are of you.
You would see what joy you've brought to my life.
You would see how much it means to me
To be able to smile, to laugh, to feel good,
To feel free, like a chile....just because of you.
If you had the chance to take the smallest glimpse inside of me,
You would see gratitude and respect....
Respect not only for what you are making of yourself,
But also for what you are helping me to be.
And you would see how much all of that means to me.
But the thing that would strike you the most,
If you ever had the chance to be me,
Would be all the love I feel for you.
And once you had felt it,
You would always remember it,
And you would understand that,
Although I am not always able
To express it or to explain
Its depth or importance to me,
It is always there...inside of me.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:25 pm
crying It really does make you think about others crying
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 6:58 pm
i really like it MimiShaoJie. i REALLY REALLY like it. it's saying what i'm shouting inside at the time. but sort of in a negative way sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 1:46 pm
well i like it!! i wish i had that touch for poetry........and its kinda what im shouting out 24/7 ^.^ but to all of my friends and hardly any family members >.> and well it really expresses how i feel towards some people.....well ill stop here.......
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 1:08 am
Yeah, U BETTER stop there.
U and me both know where this is gonna lead to.
The name starts with a B, right?
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 6:16 pm
one of them does......one starts with a J and one with an A........
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 11:48 pm
TSUKASA!!! evil evil evil evil evil
U REALLY WANT TO DIE, RIGHT?
evil evil evil evil evil evil evil evil twisted twisted twisted twisted evil evil evil evil evil evil evil evil evil evil evil stare stare stare stare stare
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 8:06 pm
i have 3 friends ones name starts with a B one with a J and one with an A and your poem expresses how i feel towards them friends.......so why do you take that in a negative way?.......i was being nice and i got slapped in the face for it....literally...at school....by.....aisha....go figure......
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