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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 3:08 pm
Can’t seem to stay Can’t seem to listen Just got to get away It is past eleven
I’m running for that one place That one place where I am no more No I am not going to loose this place I am just going to be out the door
I won’t call or telephone or write I won’t be here for a while I am leaving tonight I am traveling mile by mile
Need my space and my time Just have to to take a breath and leave Call it an early weekend at this time I will be back, please believe
My beautiful people I do love you My promises have been broken though I am leaving you but it is to fix me and you When I am gone, I just hope you know
Yes, I made a few mistakes Yes, I am sorry for one or two I am just tired of how my head aches I am just trying to break through
Can’t seem to stay Can’t seem to listen Not with the storm of grey I don’t want to see the tears glisten
I got to go sometime I just don’t want to stay anymore I got to get out of this crime I have to get out of this war
Everyone is building up anger People seem to keep getting hurt It is as if we are pulling our own trigger I just have to leave and to hit the dirt
My beautiful people I did try Just can’t seem to stay without breaking I know you may ask why when I say bye But I can’t stay on shaking…
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:09 pm
Yep...you definitely have talent. Whew! ^_^ How long have you been spilling your mind onto paper?
Sin, Halo_Rising mrgreen
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hardkoreUSMC Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 9:21 pm
I like the structure with the quatrains and and how you have everything laid out, really nice. Rhyme scheme FTW
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