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 Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 3:08 pm
Can’t seem to stay
Can’t seem to listen
Just got to get away
It is past eleven
I’m running for that one place
That one place where I am no more
No I am not going to loose this place
I am just going to be out the door
I won’t call or telephone or write
I won’t be here for a while
I am leaving tonight
I am traveling mile by mile
Need my space and my time
Just have to to take a breath and leave
Call it an early weekend at this time
I will be back, please believe
My beautiful people I do love you
My promises have been broken though
I am leaving you but it is to fix me and you
When I am gone, I just hope you know
Yes, I made a few mistakes
Yes, I am sorry for one or two
I am just tired of how my head aches
I am just trying to break through
Can’t seem to stay
Can’t seem to listen
Not with the storm of grey
I don’t want to see the tears glisten
I got to go sometime
I just don’t want to stay anymore
I got to get out of this crime
I have to get out of this war
Everyone is building up anger
People seem to keep getting hurt
It is as if we are pulling our own trigger
I just have to leave and to hit the dirt
My beautiful people I did try
Just can’t seem to stay without breaking
I know you may ask why when I say bye
But I can’t stay on shaking…
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:09 pm
Yep...you definitely have talent. Whew! ^_^ How long have you been spilling your mind onto paper?
Sin, Halo_Rising mrgreen
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hardkoreUSMC Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 9:21 pm
I like the structure with the quatrains and and how you have everything laid out, really nice. Rhyme scheme FTW
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