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 Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:50 am
heres a poem i saw recently...
When i look into your eyes i see
OUR future
When i look into your eyes i see
pain
when i look into your eyes i see
that you need me
When i look into your eyes i see
how much you love me
When i look into your eyes i see
how much you want me
When i look into your eyes i see
everything!
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:45 pm
Aww...how sweet.
U were obviously thinking about Brooke when u wrote this poem.
*OMG, are u blushing*
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 2:52 pm
hahahaha...the funny thing is you have it backwards........i didnt write it.....she did...^.^ i dont remember what i did with the one i wrote so i cant put it on here till i find it.....
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 8:46 pm
Oh..so the LOVE BIRDS write poems for each other now, huh?
Aww....how sweet.
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 3:01 pm
well heres the one i wrote...kinda short but oh well....
When i look into your eyes
I know you're the one for me,
Because i feel a wave of
Pleasure overwhelm me.
When i am with you
I am always happy,
Because when i am with you
My heart is filled with joy.
When i hold you i hope it will last forever,
But i know that as long as i have you,
I dont need it to last forever,
Because i will always love you, My Sweetheart!
i got a little bit bored one day so i just kinda scribbled something down...^.^' well anyways yeah i guess.......in a way...when i need it.... the poet in me does come out sometimes..... makes me happy XD
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 7:11 pm
......i want to say i feel that way about someone. both poems are thing i feel when im around her
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:03 pm
I got to admit (Forcing herself to believe)
This Poem is nice.
You know I don't like giving compliments so easily esp. not to u. LOL J/K
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 7:02 pm
yeah i know you dont like to compliment me lol.....
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:42 pm
love is a great gift to attain in life. breaking that love is painful, but love cannot exist without pain. pain comes with love. True love must be accepted as a package that includes all the negatives and positives of that other person. This poem reminds me of what love is and it is purely beautiful to acknowledge it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:59 pm
heres my latest poem... if anyone can interpret it good job but i wont post the meaning until later on...
Come one, Come all,
Drink 'till you drop.
For nobody cares if you wish,
But to be on top.
However, beware the harsh affairs,
Some find themselves in the arms of Death.
Those spared by Death's hunt,
Find their end with their succulent syrup stealing their breath.
and there it is only 8 lines well tell me what you all think bbl to find out (in about 3 mins har har razz )
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