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 Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:10 pm
wanting to feel your loving arms
pulling me closer to you.
my tears make the urge to be with you
turn more into a need.
so i can live
without sadness.
in order for me to be happy
i need you.
what is taking you so long
to come to me?
is it that i have to search
for you or is it that we're not to be together?
my want has turned
into a need.
it's caused by my tears.
i need to feel your loving arms
pulling me closer to you.
it has become
a want turned into a need.
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 10:19 pm
Wow such a bittersweet poem... sweet and sour. It's a sparkling gem of a poem. Definitely keep on with the writing! You are talented! ^_^
Sin, Halo_Rising mrgreen
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