Sormani
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Sormani
Please please please modify your last post in the Morrowind roleplaying application. I do not want to have to wait for another roleplayer.
There are mistakes in your post, and if Jouko realizes you don't know that, he's going to time you, and delete your introduction. SO! I will help you fix the small and few errors that Jouko finds imperitive to fix.
Your original profile, is as follows:
Character Name: Hanoumi Hazurou
Race: Kahjit
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Yellowish orange like the rest of his fur
Eye Color: green
Level: 23
Job Class: Thief
Specialization: Stealth
HP: 78
MP: 27
Fatigue: 220
Strength: 68
Intelligence: 36
Willpower: 53
Agility: 64
Speed: 78
Personality: 70
Endurance: 48
Luck: 23
Major Skill Levels: Sneak 53,Security 62, Short Blade 93, Light Armor 70, conjuration 52
Minor Skill Levels: Speechcraft 40, Mercantile 38, unarmored47, Longblade 65, Block 32
Powers: Eye of the night, Moonshadow
Sign: The Shadow
Starting location: Balmora Streets
Age: 23
Weapon(s): Daedric Shortsword, Winterwound Dagger, Riekling Lance
House (optional): Any tavern or place to sleep he can find
Short story of your life: Master thief, he will do anything for gold, he was a slave at a young age and slit his masters throat one day when he wasnt looking. He then stole all of his former masters gold and caught a stilt strider to balmora where he worked his way up the criminal ladder and when he was about to hit top, rumors of an assanation arouse, so he traveled deep into the ashlands hoping to escapes his pursuers. Still fearing them he fled from the mountains to the icy continent of soltheism, after staying on the icy continent for about a year he could not stand the cold barren lands. Now that hes moderatly sure the pursuit has ended he comes back to balmora looking for gold and power... at any cost
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This is what it should be, with proper spelling. I'll try to tone back, lest they know someone helped you.
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Character Name: Hanoumi Hazurou
Race: Khajiit
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Yellowish orange like the rest of his fur
Eye Color: green
Level: 23
Job Class: Thief
Specialization: Stealth
HP: 78
MP: 27
Fatigue: 220
Strength: 68
Intelligence: 36
Willpower: 53
Agility: 64
Speed: 78
Personality: 70
Endurance: 48
Luck: 23
Major Skill Levels: Sneak 53, Security 62, Short Blade 93, Light Armor 70, conjuration 52
Minor Skill Levels: Speechcraft 40, Mercantile 38, unarmored 47, Longblade 65, Block 32
Powers: Eye of the night, Moonshadow
Sign: The Shadow
Starting location: Balmora Streets
Age: 23
Weapon(s): Daedric Shortsword, Winterwound Dagger, Riekling Lance
House (optional): Any tavern or place to sleep he can find.
Short story of your life: Master thief, he will do anything for gold. He was a slave at a young age and slit his masters throat one day when he wasn't looking. He then stole all of his former masters gold and caught a stilt strider to balmora where he worked his way up the criminal ladder and when he was about to hit top, rumors of an assassination arose, so he traveled deep into the ashlands hoping to escapes his pursuers. Still fearing them he fled from the mountains to the icy continent of soltheism, after staying on the icy continent for about a year he could not stand the cold barren lands. Now that he is moderately sure the pursuit has ended he comes back to balmora looking for gold and power... at any cost.
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Please do not take offense to this, but I really really really do not want to have to wait for another roleplayer. The second is what it should look like. It's not absolutely perfect, but... Well... It should pass.
Please do not quote this either. I don't mean insult, and I'm sure you don't want to be banned from the roleplays. Just modify your profile to the second one, and modify your most previous post.
But remember, to reveal the fact that I helped you with this, would also reveal the fact that you didn't know there were any spelling mistakes. That would get you in as much trouble as I would be in.
There are mistakes in your post, and if Jouko realizes you don't know that, he's going to time you, and delete your introduction. SO! I will help you fix the small and few errors that Jouko finds imperitive to fix.
Your original profile, is as follows:
Character Name: Hanoumi Hazurou
Race: Kahjit
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Yellowish orange like the rest of his fur
Eye Color: green
Level: 23
Job Class: Thief
Specialization: Stealth
HP: 78
MP: 27
Fatigue: 220
Strength: 68
Intelligence: 36
Willpower: 53
Agility: 64
Speed: 78
Personality: 70
Endurance: 48
Luck: 23
Major Skill Levels: Sneak 53,Security 62, Short Blade 93, Light Armor 70, conjuration 52
Minor Skill Levels: Speechcraft 40, Mercantile 38, unarmored47, Longblade 65, Block 32
Powers: Eye of the night, Moonshadow
Sign: The Shadow
Starting location: Balmora Streets
Age: 23
Weapon(s): Daedric Shortsword, Winterwound Dagger, Riekling Lance
House (optional): Any tavern or place to sleep he can find
Short story of your life: Master thief, he will do anything for gold, he was a slave at a young age and slit his masters throat one day when he wasnt looking. He then stole all of his former masters gold and caught a stilt strider to balmora where he worked his way up the criminal ladder and when he was about to hit top, rumors of an assanation arouse, so he traveled deep into the ashlands hoping to escapes his pursuers. Still fearing them he fled from the mountains to the icy continent of soltheism, after staying on the icy continent for about a year he could not stand the cold barren lands. Now that hes moderatly sure the pursuit has ended he comes back to balmora looking for gold and power... at any cost
________________________
This is what it should be, with proper spelling. I'll try to tone back, lest they know someone helped you.
________________________
Character Name: Hanoumi Hazurou
Race: Khajiit
Gender: Male
Hair Color: Yellowish orange like the rest of his fur
Eye Color: green
Level: 23
Job Class: Thief
Specialization: Stealth
HP: 78
MP: 27
Fatigue: 220
Strength: 68
Intelligence: 36
Willpower: 53
Agility: 64
Speed: 78
Personality: 70
Endurance: 48
Luck: 23
Major Skill Levels: Sneak 53, Security 62, Short Blade 93, Light Armor 70, conjuration 52
Minor Skill Levels: Speechcraft 40, Mercantile 38, unarmored 47, Longblade 65, Block 32
Powers: Eye of the night, Moonshadow
Sign: The Shadow
Starting location: Balmora Streets
Age: 23
Weapon(s): Daedric Shortsword, Winterwound Dagger, Riekling Lance
House (optional): Any tavern or place to sleep he can find.
Short story of your life: Master thief, he will do anything for gold. He was a slave at a young age and slit his masters throat one day when he wasn't looking. He then stole all of his former masters gold and caught a stilt strider to balmora where he worked his way up the criminal ladder and when he was about to hit top, rumors of an assassination arose, so he traveled deep into the ashlands hoping to escapes his pursuers. Still fearing them he fled from the mountains to the icy continent of soltheism, after staying on the icy continent for about a year he could not stand the cold barren lands. Now that he is moderately sure the pursuit has ended he comes back to balmora looking for gold and power... at any cost.
________________________
Please do not take offense to this, but I really really really do not want to have to wait for another roleplayer. The second is what it should look like. It's not absolutely perfect, but... Well... It should pass.
Please do not quote this either. I don't mean insult, and I'm sure you don't want to be banned from the roleplays. Just modify your profile to the second one, and modify your most previous post.
But remember, to reveal the fact that I helped you with this, would also reveal the fact that you didn't know there were any spelling mistakes. That would get you in as much trouble as I would be in.
You're going to leave bcause of that? *Laughs* You know... I've never had anyone leave, because the Admin asked for a few spelling corrections. If you can't take it, than leave. Go to the Chatterbox where people like you belong.
Mad? Than prove me wrong. Prove that you can take that insult, and that you can endure the fact that the Admin has made a request for you to fix a few simple spelling mistakes.
Otherwise, you're just the same as other illiterates. And I doubt that you want to be 'just the same' as other illiterates.
Honestly where does he get off trying to talk to me like that I am done here
