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TaintedxRose

PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 11:15 am


He loves me...he loves me not
Love starts as an insignificant seed
A wishful prayer
A tiny fire
A playful giggle
A risky wink
Or a tiny smile.
Friendship buds
A tender standing
A growing warmth
A gentle trust
The bud opens its first pair of petals
Sparkling eyes
Which glows with a
New Passion
A passion that overcomes all sense
Until...finally
A chance is taken
The flower opens into
A beautiful new blossom
Growing with love
Everything else in the world becomes
Lost in the lovely nonsense
A happy obligation of happiness
Complete and total joy
A sweet innocent kiss
In the moonlight
Of a stolen night
Steals the last piece of your heart
Never ending promises
Of never ending fidelity
Cherish
Honor
Protect
Forever...Or until
The flower wilts
And the petals fade
And the promises are broken
But the memories
Of stolen kisses
In the moonlight
Are forever in your mind.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 11:17 am


Feel free to critique anyone! 3nodding

TaintedxRose


Savannah Cullen

PostPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:40 pm


TaintedxRose
He loves me...he loves me not
Love starts as an insignificant seed
A wishful prayer
A tiny fire
A playful giggle
A risky wink
Or a tiny smile.
Friendship buds
A tender standing
A growing warmth
A gentle trust
The bud opens its first pair of petals
Sparkling eyes
Which glows with a
New Passion
A passion that overcomes all sense
Until...finally
A chance is taken
The flower opens into
A beautiful new blossom
Growing with love
Everything else in the world becomes
Lost in the lovely nonsense
A happy obligation of happiness
Complete and total joy
A sweet innocent kiss
In the moonlight
Of a stolen night
Steals the last piece of your heart
Never ending promises
Of never ending fidelity
Cherish
Honor
Protect
Forever...Or until
The flower wilts
And the petals fade
And the promises are broken
But the memories
Of stolen kisses
In the moonlight
Are forever in your mind.


My goodness, this poem just struck a chord. It was amazing, and beautifully done. The message was clear, and I could really relate, great job!
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