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 Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 2:32 am
RULE'S
The rules are simple
this contest is free
the prize money will be discusd between me kohmas and ninja ( even thogh im payin )
All poems must be own work
and good luck
o... one last thing . Keep them PG13
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Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 11:31 am
I think this counts.
Lay all you love on me,
wrote by 'Lock_Wolf'. Also known as 'Wolf named Clouse.'
Lay all your love on me and I’ll in return support you through the thick and thin in all of lives cruel lies and every sweet dream. If they threaten you, call upon me and I’ll provide protection from them in love. Hold my hand and sore to the heavens by my side, for with you I think all is possible even to and in death. The light in your eyes is a light for all, so let me be the kindle of the fire that gives off that sweet light. In the darkness I was once lost, then I saw you and was turn back to both faith and love. Listen to my words so you may come to know me, as I wish to know you... I feel it may be sorrow that awaits if I strive to hard to reach out to you, but in my writings of the heart, you and you alone drive the flame. Upon the sound of your voice I feel the urge to cry out my soul!, yet my own foolish fears bind me to the spot quiet, lonely, longing, sad, and all at the same time ....happy to just be around you, even if its only minutes at a time. Find my heart, please! I wish that you may learn of me as I strive to learn of you, so do not force me away or else I fear my fire may die once and for all...
Any challengers?
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 2:07 pm
As i turn to see you stabbing me in the back
my thoughts fall back to when our love was new
but the love was lost , gone never to bee seen again
and as you call me to come back to you i tell you the reason
why. the night before you betrayed our love
broke my heart
crushed me
leaving me
for
him
.
it isnt verry good but
its somthing
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 6:44 pm
Tell me the things I Want to hear Sing me that lullaby in my ear That made me happy and made the world right That made everything seem so bright Sing me that lullaby in my ear You can even hum it as long as you're near Just please don't go away and leave me here If you do go I'll be in fear My love for you will never end Though yours might bend If you leave me then make sure to mend my heart And please, don't leave me in the dark It's not very good, but I just went with the flow ya know?
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Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:28 pm
O______O Oh wow. I can't compare. Here's mine:Another poem, a few more lines
A desperate attempt to clear my mind
Afraid to tell, afraid to speak,
The thought of you makes me weak
A dream of you, a fantasy
And they all lived happily ever after, too bad this is reality
I am a coward fearing that it will all fall apart
It’ll never work out…. broken shards of my heart
I want it to be a romantic affair
But how can it happen if you’re not there?
Or here, or near, its discouraging
I want to be yours, But I don’t know how
I’m scared you’ll just laugh and not take it seriously
I wish it were real, my dreams I mean.
Holding hands, in your arms, a beautiful love scene.
Come home and I’d light up your dreary face
Lets go dancing, or stay home and embrace
I just want to be with you, but I can’t say it!
You’ll never see this poem, how sad.
But I’m sort of glad, because I’ve just said it all
In another poem, and a few more lines.
yeah there's some parts that don't fit right there but I couldn't alter them very well DX
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Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 8:01 pm
Here are a couple of my love poems:
A Couple's Love
A girl always says,
my heart will never break...
A boy always says,
I will never let her go...
A girl always says,
I love him till the end...
A boy always says,
I love her till i die...
Last, they always say,
I will always be with you!
A pressed flower never dies,
while broken heart sits and cries.
In a dark corner over there,
while some point and others stare.
She feels so unloved,
by people and the sky above.
She cannot feel it in her heart,
the passion of love and art.
As she raises her head with tears and all,
a hand reaches for hers so small.
She stands with a smile on her face,
for who is standing next to her place.
For it just happens to be her crush,
and she smiles because of the rush.
Now she can stop all the worry,
and will never have to hurry.
For now she found true love,
and 10 years from now she sees a dove.
Now she'll never blend,
because she's loved until the end.
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:47 am
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