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PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 6:48 pm


I n t r o


→Oh my God. I think I've had this in my head for years! I've never gotten to write it down though. I never really had a good intro in mind and everything was a little fuzzy. But! I finally managed to come to, and now, there ya go.
Originally, the characters were supposed to have Japanese names. But, I thought it didn't really fit, and I wanted to see if it'd be better using english names. It's a hell of alot easier, and I like the meanings to them. : ) The original names were Yukito (Thomas), Sen (Naomi), and I haven't found a name for Nathaniel yet, a character who will be introduced a little later on. I have drawings of the characters here and there, which will put put up here as well. I ask you, please do not steal them. I've had a hard time creating them and I don't to see it in someone else's gallery, without any credit to me whatsoever.


M A I N C h a r a c t e r s

Thomas(The one on the right):AGE 16
DATE OF BIRTH May 3rd (Taurus)
FAMILY Lynn (Mother, deceased), grandmother, father (deceased)
BIO
PHYSICAL TRAITS Thomas has short black hair and mismatched eyes. One is dark-hazel, nearing black, while the other is a startlingly exquisite blue, which creates much contrast with his dark demeanor. He is rather gloomy, and has inherited many of his late-mother's constitutions. Pale-skinned and thin-figured, his appearance makes his strength very easily under-estimated.
FEARS/WEAKNESSES Cats, death
LIKES Coffee, any hot drink, chocolate, fireworks
DISLIKES spiritual insence, sleep, spirits or anything related to them
PERSONALITY Thomas is usualy very reserved, often exhausted or tired. He is devoted and strong-willed, but has a weak sence of insight and judgement.
JOB Poses as a priest


→Naomi :AGE 17
DATE OF BIRTH February 8th (Aquarius)
FAMILY Father, mother
BIO
PHYSICAL TRAITSNaomi's appearance is very lively. She has long, curly pink hair, usualy tied in pigtails. Her eyes are olive, and her skin is light-golden. She thin and slim-built, with a medium height.
FEARS/WEAKNESSES darkness, being cornered
LIKES Sweets, french pasteries, cute/shiny things,
DISLIKES
PERSONALITY Namoi's cheerful attire reflects her personality. She is enthusiastic and bright, but her absence of mind makes her quite clumsy and oblivious. However, she is very caring, stubborn and optimistic. Although she may not look it, she is also quite a pack-rat, collecting many strange and rare objects.
JOB unskillful waitress


→Nathaniel :AGE 16
DATE OF BIRTH July 24th (Leo)
FAMILY Father, younger brother Peter
BIO
PHYSICAL TRAITS Nathaniel is a dainty young man, cursed with an unstable health and a frail body. He is gentle and calm, usualy hiding his painful sorrow beneath a soft smile which the others know to be his trademark. He has violet eyes and thin honey-colored hair that stretches a few inches bellow his shoulders. He is pale-skinned and has a tall frame.
FEARS/WEAKNESSES Fire, his father
LIKES odd food-mixes, latin, books, other cultures
DISLIKES crowds, hospitals
PERSONALITYAlthough he is often deprived from his weakness, Nathaniel's compassionate personality proves himself useful. He is gentle and kind, gifted with strong insight and an alert conciousness.
JOB none


N e w s & U p d a t e s

→July 06
Main post almost done. : ) Afterwards, I'll start on the next chapter.


O t h e r
PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 6:50 pm


A New Home


Thomas looked through his own reflection in the car window, his eyes following the farmland and occasional batch of trees. Black eyes and black hair looked right through him, bored and dull. He palm was resting against his cheek, and he sighed, making a line on the fog which he had just released on the window.

"Don't worry, honey, everything will be fine," his mother said concerningly, looking over at him through the mirror. Her appearance was as frail as his, but she had sad, empty eyes bellow long raven hair, bangs cut straight above her thin brows. Dark rings had formed beneath her eyes from lack of sleep and almost constant stress. "You'll have more place to play than that ruddy old appartment." The woman added, laughing before starting into violent couphs. Through hearing those, Thomas' brows furrowed slightly, and he resisted wanting to cover his ears; The sound made his guts clench.

As silent crept back into the car, Thomas slowly fell asleep angainst the window. He didn't want to think of everything that had occured before his mother decided to move to the country. It was no surprise: she needed to calm down, after his father's suicide, and she clearly couldn't take the pressure of the city. Though they had barely any money, they managed to buy a house, about an hour from the city, in the middle of, well, nowhere. Naomi will be lonely, now that he's moved. At first, he was extremly dissapointed, and worried about Naomi, but he convinced himself that it was all for the better. He couldn't stand watching his mother grow sicker and weaker by the day, and smoking 10 cigarettes a day didn't really help either. So, without hesitating, they had moved, and the two left.

Thomas awoke with a start as his mother shook his shoulder for him to wake up, and he rubbed his eyes, which watered slightly from the brilliant sun that scorched over the fields. Crows cawed, watching the house's new owners curiously. He looked back at them uncomfortably, stepping sideways, closer to her mother as he held a box and his bag over his shoulders.

"Isn't it beautiful?" Said Thomas' mother, Lynn, gazing up at the old house with hopeful eyes from the driveway. She was always fascinated with antiques, and this house certainly reflected that. The colors were fading, and when Thomas stepped on the front porch, he felt the wood creak under his feet. A cold wind chilled his bones, and he shuddered slightly, stepping through the loose door, chosing not to answer in fear of getting her dissapointed.

He quietly marched up the stairs, which were stuck against the wall in front of the door, and he settled the box and his bag on the bed, where the mattress had already been moved up.

His room was pretty simple: an old desk, a single window, a mirror here, a wardrobe there. Dust covered most of the furniture, and, as Thomas looked around, he spotted small paw prints on the floor, where the dust had gathered especially. He blinked, benting down to examine it, and blew the white powder away. He'd never been very curious, and he would rather keep away from things which didn't involve him.

Unpacking and filling the empty house continued this way for a week. Since it was summer, Thomas didn't have to worry about school, or friends, and would sit in the kitchen throughout most of the day, watching his mother painting and cleaning the old house.

One day, while he held a box which his mother had told him to bring to the attic, he stopped as he spotted someone sitting in the staircase; a strange, who Thomas had not yet come to meet. He blinked at his presence, all the same keeping quiet, his face monotone as always.

There, sitting casually in the flight of stairs was a man with long black hair dangling over his waist. Though he was good-looking, something about him, made Thomas uneasy. He was looking opposite Thomas, watching his mother placing the glasses in the cupboards, couphing once in a while. His head turned as he felt Thomas' eyes behind him, revealing piercing blue eyes and a graceful face. He was young and handsome, yet his age was impossible to determine.

A crease appeared between Thomas' brows as he frowned. "Who are you?"

The man blinked in surprise, standing up. "So you can see me?"

Thomas nodded. He stepped back as the stranger approached. He glanced behind him at his mother, who didn't seem to notice anything at all.

"Forgive me if I frighten you," the young man said, bending his knees so his eyes leveled Thomas'. He smiled brightly before speaking again: "I would tell you my name, if I had one, but sadly, I'm afraid I don't remember it. No one's used it for avoer fifty years. A name is easy to forget you're dead." He laughed uneasily, his smile hiding his sorrow. At his words, Thomas stepped back again, dropping the box as he stared at the other, fright reflecting in his widened eyes. But before he could run, the spirit braught his index finger to Thomas' lips, hushing him. "There's nothing to fear, dear child. I am but a mere protector of this house, and whatever resides in it, meaning you and your mother. I've been... very lonely. I only wish to watch over those around me. But, your mother, she cannot see me, correct? She seems very ill... I'm afrasid I can't do much for her unless..."

Thomas' heart jumped, suddenly forgetting the fact that this young man before him was in fact, dead. "You can help her?" He asked, trying his best to keep his voice down. Pleased by his sudden excitement, the spirit smiled. "There is a way. But, in this form, I am as useless as a gust of wind. I must have a solid form, but, it is complicated."

Thomas thought for a moment, remembering the way he had looked at her. Would she be happy with a new husband? "You love her then, don't you?" He concluded, eyes locked on the other's.

The spirit smiled brightly again. "You are a smart boy. But, all I can do is watch, as she can not love me back if she can not see me."

"I know," Thomas said. "How can you help her if she can't see you?"

"I need a body. Mine has gone to shreds many years ago, and there is not one for another 20 miles. I need a dying one, one that isn't alive, nor dead. Somewhere I can slip easily into, without having to hurt anyone. Do you understand? You're young, but I trust your intellegence. I have known you since you came, after all. How old are you?"

"...12," he answered, turning around as he suddenly heard his mother call for him. "Will you be back again?" He asked before leaving.

"Of course," the spirit replied, standing back straight. "I'm always around. If you need my help, just call for me and I'll be there."

"Okay." Thomas said, before the spirit vanished. He smiled, finding comfort and trust in the handsome ghost, and he immediatly turned to meet with his mother who'd called him to get ready to leave.

*~*~*


Days passed since Thomas had met with the spirit haunting his house. He hadn't seen him since then and was growing worried. His mind was usualy burried in his thoughts of him, wondering how he had died, what his life was like before his death. Did he had loved ones? Had he been lonely there all his life? He pondered those questions as he sat in the car again, gazing idly at the rain drops clashing against the window. The roads were busy today and dark grey clouds covered the sky. He heard his mother take medicine pills from her bag, then couphing again. They were heading back to the city to help his grandmother with her appartment.

"Honey, fix your belt, will you? The roads are scary today," his mother said nervously, gesturing a slender yet pale hand at the loose belt around Thomas' waist. She was couphing again, and her voice was weary, and as she glanced back at him, he obliged immediatly.

Something smashed against the front of the car, slid against the side, the glass shattered, the car toppled, pushed over by a truck that had suddenly turned uncontrollably.

Water started to pour in through the broken glass as the car hit the surface of the river bellow the bridge on which, Thomas was sure they'd been driving not but a second ago. His head felt heavy, and he floated in the deep abyss, water rushing through his lungs until he realized what was going on and he shut his mouth and attempting to keep in his breath, at the same time, swallowing a huge draft of water.

Ignoring the blood that hovered in the ravier around him, he struggled to open the door, seing as the windowseal was still embroidered with sharp glass. The pressure in the water was crushing the sensitive nerves in his ears, and, unable to keep from breathing anymore, he opened his mouth, letting in another quaff of the river's water. He glanced back, seeing his mother's hair floating around her gracefully, her arms loose and her forehead bloodied and smashed, the darkness of the water blackening her features.

Water filled his lungs. He choked, finally managing to open the door with a kick formed with the last of his strength.

'please help me. anybody... help me.' Thomas shut his mouth again, trying to swim up, but the weight was too much, and he could not clearly see the surface of the water from the blood over his eyes and the heavy burning sensation on the side of his head.

"Little boys can be so gullible."

A familiar voice kept him concious, and Thomas whipped around to see that he was no longer beneath the freezing water, but he was now kneeling in a nostalgic room, filled with a warm atmosphere. There was a golden and crimson rug under him, and armchairs and a sofa were settled around a fireplace. This was his living room, yet it wasn't. It was much more new, yet, not exacly modern. In his head, a repeatatif beeping noise was resounding loudly, and he heard people shouting, a girl crying...

Then, a young man with lucious black hair stood from his chair, gazing casually at Thomas with those piercing blue eyes.

"You..!" Thomas managed to choke, shaking from the cold and dripping in a mixture of river water, mud and blood. The spirit merely sighed at his reaction. "I told you I needed a fresh dying body didn't I? And now it's kneeling right in front of me. What a surprise!"

"Am I...?" Thomas feared the worst.

"No, not exacly. And that's a particularly good thing for me. You see, the other humans are keeping you alive, but only to the slightest."

A shock ran through his heart and he clutched his chest before couphing up blood. The same was repeated twice. What was going on? The voices were giving him a terrible headache.

"Luckily for me, you will live. But for now--"

Thomas widened his eyes as the spirit suddenly dissapeared and reappeared in front of him. His cold fingers touched his jaw lightly, and he pressed his lips against Thomas' in a light kiss. Darkness swallowed him as another jolt made his heart thump painfully against his chest, and then... nothing.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 6:57 pm


Black Ink


Number 42.... Number 42...

Holding out a piece of paper on which an address was written on it, Thomas, a young teenager of sixteen with pale features and unlikely mismatched eyes, marched down the narrow corridor of an old appartment building which was built on a rather isolated street, somewhere in the middle of the city.

The walls were thin and the heating and lighting was weak, making this building not a very lively place to live. The cold weather outside pierced through its walls, making him shiver despite the black coat he wore over an equally dark suit. His ears were covered in the whool of his scarf, and his gloves protected his hands from the frigid air. Above him, lights flickered and sparked, threatening to fall on him. Still, he continued down the hallway between the doors to appartment, on which numbers were fixed above it. He scanned them, looking for a particular number: 42. However, he only found that number once he reached the far-end of the second floor, where the strong smell of mold and something decomposing reached his nostrils. He grimaced at the smell, but did not continue to let it distract him.

The door creaked open almost as soon as Thomas pressed the doorbell. There, a young woman holding a cigarette between her middle and forefinger stood, looking down at him rather miserably. He managed to see passed her, but returned his attention to her immediatly.

"You seem a bit young for an exorcist, aren't you?" The woman said finally after eyeing him suspiciously for a few minutes, a shaky hand bringing her cigarette to her lips.

"Perhaps," Thomas answered, his voice as monotone as his countenance. "But would you honestly preffer an old man, deem for retirement, to do the job?"

Again, the woman remained silent, her eyes framed with heavy wrinkles gazing boredly at his eyes. After another few minutes, she rolled her eyes and pushed the door further outward with her back, letting him inside.

"What, you from church camp or something?" She said mockingly with a snort, pouring herself a glass of Vodka from the counter. Thomas took a while to answer, as he was scanning the rather trashy-looking appartment, closely observing for any crucial signs.

"Not exacly." Thomas answered, his voice kept steady as always. He was looking up at the cieling, as though trying to look for something. He didn't seem very amuzed or distracted by her comment. "When was the last time you saw 'it'?"

"'Bout two nights ago.(she took a sip, gasping with a hiss as she felt the alcohol burn her tongue) I called just to be sure it wouldn't come back. ********, it was the ugliest s**t I've ever seen." The woman said with a shake of her head, pouring herself another glassful of Vodka as soon as she finished the last one. "It still had the black stuff and everything. It kinda got pissed after I threw the chair at it (she gave a brief chuckle). And... it ate my phone. Son of a b***h."

A moment passed before Thomas returned to the kitchen after examining the appartment. Near the bathroom, he'd found a great black water mark on the ceiling and though he found it suspicious, he found no other sign of the thing's presence. Not even he could feel it. Taking a cautious decision, he nonetheless lit up incence in every corner of each room. He covered his nose, sensitive to the strong smell.

"I've checked everywhere, nothing seems to be out of the normal." Thomas said, slipping off his gloves and unrolling his scarf around his neck.

"Are you serious? God, I feel like an idiot. How could I be so stupid to think someone (she took another toss of alcohol, waving her other hand expressively, which held the cigarette, around) could believe me? I mean, maybe it's the alcohol? Hell, like I know. ********, this is so full of s**t." Shaking her head again, she exhald a stream of smoke, leaning against the fridge behind her and looking up, irritated of her own foolishness. "I swear I saw it. It was right there (she pointed at the corner of the wrecked living room in front of the kitchen), ready to ******** eat me. You don't believe me, do you?"

"If I didn't, I wouldn't be here," Thomas said, though his thoughts were elsewhere. The woman glared at him, unpleased by his carelessness and his lack of reaction. She muttered something before emptying her drink, looking sideways in frustration. Her hands still shook slightly. During that time, there was an awkward silence, then, finally, Thomas stood up from the seat he'd taken in front of the counter (where he had been contemplating) and he moved back to the crowded living room, stepping over the junk scattered over the floor. He looked around again, mostly at the ceiling.

Suddenly, he whipped his head to the side as he felt the presence of death. There, stood a greying bald man with purpled lips and a scarred face. The room was suddenly colder than before, and even Thomas' breath fogged up as much as if he'd been outside. A black liquid dripped from his eyes and waterfalled down his chin from his mouth. Instead of speak, he choked, letting out even more liquid that slithered down his legs and hit the ground gracefully. It was a gruesome sight, one which Thomas had seen countless times. Yet... something was different: he was not yet familiar with the tar-like substance which leaked from the body.

"Don't look at it!" Thomas warned, couphing as the incence continued to fill his lungs, even blurring his vision slightly. Although he was acute to it, the woman, was not. Immediatly, she nodded nervously, a shocked expression on her face, ducking behind the counter which seperated the scene from the kitchen. She braugh her knees to her cheeks, eyes wide open and ears perked up.

Stepping back as the man approached him. He dug in his pocket for something, then as he gripped his gun, he cocked it and pulled the trigger in one quick movement. His eyes squinted, trying to see more clearly through the thick mist released from the incence sticks. He made a mental note: incence was a bad idea.

Despite the bullet hole in the man's forehead, he continued to walk foreward as Thomas' back reached the other wall. His eyes widened; that had never happened in his 'career'. The black tar simply replaced the dead skin and nerves, filling up the hole, yet letting the bullet exacly where it had been.

Plan B.

As the bald man came before him only a few inches away, Thomas dug something in his pocket, a small crucifix the size of his thumb and muttered something before thrusting it against the body's chest. He stopped, his bent neck making his head fall foreward. Although he still stood, his arms were limp, and his eyes were wide open, his mouth loose and still dripping with the black substance.

For a second, nothing happened, but Thomas kept his eyes fixed upon the other. His heart thumped against his chest, knowing that it wasn't over just yet. Unexpectedly, the tar blasted out of the man from everywhere and its ends tossed around like millions of panicked worms. Thomas watched in astonishement until the ooze stuck itself on the wall and melted away behind it. The corpse collapsed in front of Thomas, falling at his feet as he retrieved the crucifix, slipping it in his pocket. A mark of about its size appeared on his thumb. How could it affect him as well?

Gasping for fresh air, Thomas bent down with his hands on his knees, feeling feverish and sick. He couphed, suddenly eager to leave this home to fresh air.

"Is it gone?" The woman's shaky voice called from beneath the counter. She stood up from behind it, looking over to see Thomas, alive, though not exacly well, and the corpse that had managed to get in her appartment. "Okay, there?"

Thomas straightened up again, running both hands through his hair with deep sigh, trying to caln himself despite the clog in his throat. "Everything should be fine, now. I don't think it'll come back." He said, letting out two final couphs.

"Good. I don't want that hanging around, though. I don't really fancy naked corpse," she said, gesturing at it.

"I understand. I'll make sure he gets to a cemetery by the end of the week."

"By the way, how did you get eyes like that?" the woman asked, her curious voice misleading her indelicate personality.

Thomas' countenance suddenly darkened. He was used to the question, but not the answer, which was always the same: "...Curiosity."
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