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Daust Masana Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:00 am
Yes, I'm now a member of Uncyclopedia, and to celebrate my new membership, I immediately started a new article to join the site's pages for as long as it's around. If you guys have the time, please read the article and tell me what you think. Any critique would be vastly appreciated.
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 9:20 am
This critic gives your article 2/2 broken thumbs up.
I hope you get the chance to finish it.
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Daust Masana Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 10:01 am
defender158 This critic gives your article 2/2 broken thumbs up. It's tough being a critic, ain't it? defender158 I hope you get the chance to finish it. I got six days left. That won't be any problem.
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 7:00 pm
Farley Grey It's tough being a critic, ain't it?
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Daust Masana Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 9:27 pm
Well, I finished the article. Read the rest if you want.
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:26 am
Will do.
By the way, is Yellowcard an actual band or in any way a pun off of a different band?
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Daust Masana Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:32 am
It's an actual band. If ye don't believe me, there is now a link on my page to the Wikipedia article about the band, so you can see that I'm right for yourself. smile
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:40 am
Okay. And just so you know, your Alexander The Great paragraph appears unfinished. There's no ending to the last sentence.
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Daust Masana Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:46 am
The paragraph is finished. Well, to me, anyway. The sentence ends right after "MTV and EA", since there is a little tiny period there, though, the blue text on EA might make it hard to see. Or not. confused
If you think the paragraph needs more meat, feel free to edit it and add something.
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:49 am
Actually, I just must have missed EA. To me, it looked like the sentence ended with and. But now I see it.
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Daust Masana Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 9:53 am
Alrighty then. Glad to have that cleared up.
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 10:05 am
Here's something to try: highlight your "Blind And Deaf" picture. If your computer reacts the same way as mine, it'll look exactly like a satellite TV.
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Daust Masana Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 10:14 am
Dear lord, it does. eek
Sweet. domokun
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 10:18 am
And sour.
Let's not go there again.
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mrgreen
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Daust Masana Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 10:20 am
Aye, let's just say we did go there again, and that Alberto is not an emo.
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