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Yah poo!
The Karels-Murphy Thriller...Read!!!!
Episode 1:
P.S. Episode two is more interesting, but you may need the beginning to make sense of number two…

Narrator: It is Brigitte's birthday and Brittany is spending the night because she is da bomb. They were outside sitting at the bon fire with Brigitte's parents eating smore's. As the fire pit is burning their faces practically off, Brigitte’s father says something.

Nick: “Do you hear that music? What the heck is it?!?”

Brigitte: “What music? I don’t hear any music.”

Brittany: “That is weird music!”

Brigitte: “Oh I hear it now!”

Nick: “It sounds like the ride with the horses.”

Tammy: “The carousel?”

Brittany: “You mean a merry-go-round?”

Brigitte: “It’s a carousel.”

Brittany: “Well the new word for it is merry-go-round.”

Brigitte: “Okay then. Hey daddy can we go over there to see where it is coming from?”

Nick: “I don’t care.”

Brittany: “Sweet!”

Narrator: It was an hour past curfew, but the girls didn’t really care. . . So the girls went inside and put on all black clothes, except for their cool vibrant skirts (which they plan on wearing on Tuesday). They head out the door

*Dramatic music plays*

Brittany: “I have to go to the bathroom.”

Brigitte: “Really? Me too.”

Narrator: The girls head inside to “do their business” and grab a flashlight (which they won’t even use) on their way out. They walk on their way back behind Brigitte’s house and talk about random things that they don’t remember. They keep walking down the street to find a cul-de-sac which has loud music coming from a house.

Brigitte: “Are they having a party?”
Brittany: “There’s no one outside, or inside, it looks like…”

Brigitte: “Let’s hide behind that pine tree, so we can get closer.”

Narrator: They hid behind the pine tree, and still couldn’t see anything. Brigitte tells Brittany to hold her purse and “crawls” closer. (They walked normally.) Brigitte still couldn’t see anyone or anything, so Brittany decided to try and look, but neither could she.

Brittany: “Oh well, let’s just go to the park.”

Brigitte: “Okay.”

Narrator: So they walked across the cal-de-sac and took the path to the park.

Brittany: “Let’s swing!”

Brigitte: “That’s exactly what I was thinking!”

Narrator: They sat on the swings and talked….about…nothing….I guess. Suddenly, a car went by to the house with the loud music.

Brittany: “Ah, s**t, who’s that? More people going to the party?”

Narrator: They hurridly crossed the playground to the slides to get a closer look. Then another car went by. They quick ducked and hid.



Episode 2:
P.S. This part is better!

Narrator: As we last left the heroines* they were hiding behind a slide at the playground . . .

Brigitte: "Ho s**t! Its da popo!"

Brittany: "Ho s**t! It is!"

Narrator: In realance terms they said nothing and the two heroines* saw two cop cars race by. They had come because, it was midnight and their music was too loud at the house that the girls had been watching.

Brigitte: “Want to crawl over there and get closer?”

Brittany: “Sure, I’ll get off this way.”

Narrator: So they made their way to the path and layed next to the bushes so the people wouldn’t see them.

Brittany: “Cover your head so they don’t see you.”

Brigitte: “If they turn towards us, they will see us….stay here your closer to the bushes.

Narrator: Brigitte made her way in back of Brittany so the cops wouldn’t see her. It had scared them more when one of the cops flashed their flashlight across the street where the girls were. Their hearts jumped as the light went by. The cops were ready to go and getting into their cars. The part they were dreading most was about to happen… the first cop turn in the cul-de-sac the light from the car went past their head and then the sound of the car went past their side. One down, one to go. The second car turned on and turned in cul-de-sac the light went past their heads and they heard it drive past them. The girls stayed down for a few seconds for them to leave. Brigitte stuck her head up.

Brigitte: “They are gone.”

Brittany: “Oh my God that was really scary!”

Brigitte: “That’s probably the scariest thing that’s ever happened in my life . . . and the most dangerous.”

Brittany: “Mine too.”

Narrator: They hopped up off of the side walk and ran to the park to get Brigitte’s bag.

Brittany: “Are we going to stay here for a while?”

Brigitte: “I don’t know, what do you want to do?”

Brittany: “I don’t know?”

Narrator: And you know how that goes.
So the girls walked backed home to the fire pit and told Brigitte’s parents all about it. Then they went into her room and started to type this up, because they thought that it was cool. Now the girls are still trying to type this thingy while falling asleep. They both wrote half of this, so if you have complaints take it up with them.

Written by:
Brittany Karels
&
Brigitte Murphy

The End!
Goodnight!


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  • User Comments: [3]
    your future profession:Writing novels :]

    so did this really happen? or did ya make it up? eitherway, its kick a** :]

    ooooooooooo i have something to tell you!! buts its really long and i dont really feel like typing alot right now, man i wish i could call u n tell you
    iys soo funny, and yet kind of sad too :s
    idk
    anyway, i lvoe you
    hope to talk to you soon :]
    ooh, and we need to pick eh date for teh marrage xD
    its been soo long since we planned this o.o
    im such a bad b/f, i forget things too easily :[

    comment Romoshero · Community Member · Wed May 30, 2007 @ 02:33am
    O.O

    Thats funny because when i was at my friends we heard a party with carnval music at night O.O I wonder...... -weird music-

    comment elemtal_alchemist · Community Member · Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 08:02pm
    xD

    comment Mabasa · Community Member · Sat Jun 02, 2007 @ 11:51pm
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