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UNDER CONSTRUCTION!!!!!!! more poems to follow. lots more
so this is a journal entry that has all my poems i made during my school year. most were written when i was in my random mode, so they may sound really weird. some of them are some of my best poems. i kinda got into making poems cause i like to rhyme, and stuff. some poems are dedicated to people, or things. and several poems are co-written by some of my friends, cause i run out of ideas sometimes. remember several poems were written in a short amount of time and they are very random. i would like some comments showing some suggestions, praises, and support. also constructive critcism is loved. *emphasis on constructive* you can also give me ideas on my next poems. thank you and enjoy the poetic-ness.
DUCKIES
there was a ducky named bucky.
this ducky was so lucky
then his feet got really mucky
and his face was sucky.
that was the end of the
ducky that was lucky named bucky
DUCKIES #2
The ducky named bucky
saw a bird ans said "yucky!"
then the ducky named bucky
was so lucky........again!
-both cowritten by: D.L. and T.M.
POEM
poems
are poems
but poems are not stories
so poems ae poems which are poetic
poems take time
time to rhyme
you need to make them with a dime
poems are poems
-co written by D.L.
BIRDS
birds
birds
birds are like words
they flutter and fly
they fly in the sky
they go bye-bye
they lie when they are dead
*sigh*
BIRDS!
LOVE
love
love
love is peaceful as a dove
love is patient love is kind
love will kick your behind
love
love
love is like a butterfly
it flutters and flies
it flies away
away in the sky
then it goes bye-bye
love is not meant for us
love sometimes makes me cuss
love is not for you and me
my love belongs to a tree or bee
CHAPTER 18
loquacia is loquacious
but her sister is latosha
confuciousisn is confising
and soliloquy is soliloqucious
tamala likes tamales
potata likes potatoes
tomata like tomatoes
- a poem inspired by our chapter 18 spelling words
BAD SMELLS
bad smells
are smelly
smelly like peanut butter and jelly
there are different kinds of smells
good smells and bad
and it kind of makes me mad
when someone farts
it starts
and never stops
it kind f smells like stinky mops
bad smells
smell bad
and thats the end of that.
-inspired by J.S. fart
-cowritten by D.L.
BLUE
blue
blue
blue is a cool color
it makes you feel younger
it is the color of the ocean and sky
where fish swim and birds fly
blue is our school color
it makes us stronger
blue is also sad
it can be bad
blue
blue
it makes cows go poo
which causes them to say "moo"
and we say "pee you!"
-cowritten by D.L.
DARKNESS
darkness all around me
it's so dark i can't see
its creepy and scary
im all alone
i can't talk on the phone
darkness....
*to all the depressed, alone people in the world*
SUN
the sun is bright
it gives me warmth
it gives me light
the sun is way up high
high in the blue sky
the sun is happy
the sun is hot
its really really hot
*to all the happy people who love the brghtness of the sun*
TODAY
today
today
today is yesterday's tomorrow
today is happy
yay
today is bad
so sad
WALLS
walls
walls
wallsaretall
like tall tress
that are a home to bees
walls can be painted
painted different colors
painted like a rainbow
the wall are smothered with color?
WALLS!
WORDS]
words may make me happy
words may make me sad
words may make me amd
because those words are really bad
some words may be bad to say,
some words may make my day
words in this poem
may not make sense at all
words can be anywhere
all you have to do is call
UNTITLED
you think you know it all
but you know as much as a wall
you lie too much, its true
that why i don't love you
you start too much drama
you'll end up ahving karma
tou don't deserve our frienddship
i feel like such a fool for
ever thinking you were true
you know you act like that
and thats a true fact
you really need to chnage how you act
this is not to offend you
but you traet your "friends" like poo
*to a certain person i shall not name*
-cowrittem by MR.V.R, D.S, D.L.
UNTITLED
God sent a sign to me
to let his peop,e free
amd bring them to the sea
it includes the community
i need some chicken and rice
bring some Coke with ice
i need this to build my strength
we are to travel a long length
we must revelutionize
to mae the world more modernized
we must contorl the world
it might ruin every boy and girl
this poem is not of violence
there must be silnece
the world must listen to me
we must go to the...
SEA!
LOVE POEM
there is still more...later....
 joolee_monkey23 · Fri Jul 06, 2007 @ 11:44pm · 4 Comments |
