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Minnie7's poems
Theese poems are some of the poems that I've written.
The existence of the one and only
Monsters all around me
This is what I see
I recognize your face among their
And I really don’t think it’s fair

I loved you all along
But now I know that I was wrong
I thought that you were different
Now this will be the end

I’m standing all alone
Hanging on the phone
Her voice is haunting my inner ear
Why should this appear?

I could already hear the ring of the bells
But you’re just like everybody else
You told me that I was the one and only
But now I feel so lonely

Monsters all around me
This is what I see
I recognize your face among their
And I really don’t think it’s fair

- Jannie Leen
July 15th 2007





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    l-Jordan-l
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    commentCommented on: Sat Dec 15, 2007 @ 08:57am
    i like this one. your usage of words is really good 3nodding


    commentCommented on: Thu Jul 24, 2008 @ 01:10am
    I read all your poems and this one and the Sweet Love, are my favorite. [Sorry if I got the title wrong] I like how much you put into them, especially this one!


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