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Post Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 @ 04:06am 1 comments





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Crystal Kosso
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comment Commented on: Tue Jun 28, 2005 @ 09:05pm
nice, Out of all your entries (whoo! 3!) like i said earlier, this one is my favorite. The repition of "light bulb" is good, but then towards the end, it just stops. When i re-read it though, i think that the repition stopping is fine. I also like the similes you make, i see it as real symbolic. So, overall great job, keep it up hun! Much love!


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