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What ever i think should be mentioned
Blaze's Trail Chapter 1:A Family of Alchemy
Prologue

“This Can't Be...
I've Killed Them...
I've Killed My Family...”

Hono stared at the ashes of his home and saw the burnt bodies of his family, which looked black as charcoal.

“There must be a way to bring them back....there must be! Alchemy can do anything!”

Chapter 1

“Hey Daddy! Check this out!”

Hono scratched the flint against another rock and and sparks flew and suddenly there was a long trail of fire in the air! “Good Hono! You picked up the element of fire pretty quickly. Just like me when I was your age.” Hono's father pat him on the head and went back inside their home. “Cool!” Hono said. He was amazed by his new alchemy abilities.
Hono was a very young boy around the age of 7. He had spiky red hair and eyes the color of flames. He worked hard to try to help his family. He was the only child and the only family member that actually spent time with him was his father. His mother was high-ranking state alchemist, so she rarely came home. Her sepcalty in alchemy was water. She could guide it along certain paths, even make to force of it's current stronger. One winter, she decided to come home. They were finally all together.
It was a dreadful winter, so Hono and his father's alchemy ability helped an awful lot. It started his fireplace when there were no more matches. It helped them cook when the electricity went out. There was plenty of gasoline to help amplify his abilities. But one day, while walking in his home with his flint handy, he tripped and accidentally scraped the two stones. It was so instinct to him to instantly adjust the air density that it became fire in a blink of an eye. The fire caught onto the rags that were placed on top of the gas barrels. Hono ran to the kitchen to go get some water when suddenly there was an explosion!
A quarter of their home was blown to bits. With the second floor on fire, wood began collapsing, soon with stacks of wood higher than Hono. He couldn't get through. Hono's mother came running in, just before the the stacks grew too high. “Hono!! Where are you!?!?!” she screamed. “I'm over here!!!!” He yelled back as loud as he could so she could find her. She ran over to the kitchen and found Hono trapped inside what seemed like a wooden barrier. With water being her alchemy specialty, she quickly turned the sink of and aimed the water the wooden planks by transmutating a wooden extender from the remaining wood. It knocked over just enough wood for Hono to barely fit through. “Come on!” Hono's mother yelled. She grabbed Hono and pulled him out. But just as she had gotten him out, piles of wood collapsed on her! “Go...on...I'll make it out...” her voice sounded rough but she was still okay. Hono ran out the front door. Right as he touched pavement of his pathway, his home completely burst into flames. “Mom!!!!!' Hono screamed. He could not hear any reply, or anything else but crackling. The home then collapsed.
When the fire department finally put out the fire, Hono ran as close as he could to the home as he could. “Mommy! Daddy!!!” he screamed. After shifting a few planks of charred wood, his face went into totally shock. What he had seen had given him nightmares for the rest of his life. He had just seen the burnt bodies of his parents. He mothers burnt face stared at him as if she were screaming. Hono drew back and began to weep, but at the same time was scared. “No...No! No! No! No! No!” he repeatedly said that until his mouth went dry. “They can't be dead! They can't be!” He already knew they were dead by tried to make himself believe that they were not. “I can bring them back,” he thought. “I can bring them back with alchemy!”
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Srry for the delay guys, internet wasn't working yesterday...
and one other thing, i stopped attempting ot try to start PoT so it isn't going to be written anymore unless i can get ideas.

and I will up date the two storys every other week






User Comments: [6]
Koigokoro_no_Kirai
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Wed Jan 09, 2008 @ 12:39am


Oooh!
I got an idea for the PoT...(even though I know NOTHING about alchemy but...here goes nothing)

Why not, (since, basically, your plots revolve around massive disasters) he creates a giant storm or something? Or...like....something went wrong with his alchemy so...Every time he touches someone they are electrocuted and they die? (I can think of a REALLY good one for the last one....but it's your thing..I won't steal blaugh )

Eh...that's MY opinion...
But like I said...I know NOTHING of alchemy so...
Work with what you can...just throwing an idea out or two out there... sweatdrop


XxDa2xX
Community Member





Wed Jan 09, 2008 @ 09:19pm


orrrr he could go to the dark side and cause mass destruction and mahem!!! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!! But, idk. I'm not into this whole alchemy thing..... lol


Hono-san
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Wed Jan 09, 2008 @ 10:18pm


1. no this thing is not based on mass destruction
2.hmmm i could try that....


dakkudeman
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Thu Jan 10, 2008 @ 01:55am


e.O it was good is it like the books as like the setting history and stuff or is it random stuff that is not close to ed or al

if it was like the history he would be an isbalian cause of his eye


Hono-san
Community Member





Thu Jan 10, 2008 @ 02:36am


1.WTF??? Lesbian Wtf?
2.Yah it's around ed and al's time


angel shinobi
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Sat Jan 12, 2008 @ 01:00am


sad so very sad cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry


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