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As we ran away I realised that I was running with some random person and asked "where are we going?"
"To my house we'll be safer their" She said
Well anywhere is safer than the school I thought. As we ran to her house I got a glimps of how many cop cap their really where, if I would have cunted I know I would have come up with a least 30!
When we got to her house (witch was only like 300 yards from the school) We ran up the stairs and locked the door behind us.
"So what now" I asked
"We wait, O and my names Jamie by the way"
Just then her mom came though the door with cookies "would you and Jevin like some cookies?"
"sure" we both said at the some time.
As I at I got up and looked out the window, It was the blue truck!!!! It was sitting right out side the school! it even had the huge crash mark and all the windows where broken. My mouth droped and cookie rolled out of my mouth as I als relised How did her mom know my name?






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FLiCLi
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 11, 2008 @ 07:00am
Awesome story man, I'm anxious to see what'll happen next. wink

Though, that last sentence, "My mouth droped and cookie rolled out of my mouth as I als relised How did her mom know my name?" is a bit confusing :S


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 11, 2008 @ 11:28pm
ya! I do a revised summary next



TheFitz1
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