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Hitsuzen - In life there is only the work of Hitsuzen
my short story
meh....my friends say its depressing and it's in the form of a dialogue, script kind of thing but anyway i wrote this short story:

Close to death, saved by light.

i sit here remembering the pain. Those memories i pushed back, creep deeper into my heart as i write these words. Yet i have the will to keep going.

Outside i am surrounded yet i feel alone.

My friends don't care about me except one. They don't care what would happen to except her. Yet i don't have the courage to tell her what hasa happened.

i closed off my feelings to everyone, even her. My sorrow and pain scars me. Dear reader the pain has stayed far too long, i feel like moving on to another world. Yet i can not...

mother:*in a worried tone* REIKA!!!Please come out, you'll starve yourself!Reika!please

What's the point of me living when there's no one for me to turn to....What's the point of life when you want to die?*starts to cry*

mother: Reika!Your friend Aya is here!

*outside of reika's room*

mother: Please Aya!She will die if she stays in there!*crying*

Aya: *gasp**bangs on door*Reika!!Please come out!if not can i come in?

Reika: *sigh* very well but only you Aya!

Aya: o..ok!

*once inside*

Aya: Reika!Your soo thin and pale!lets get you out of here!

Reika: NO!

Aya: WHAT!?!??!

Reika: what's the point of me living?

Aya: umm...umm...

Reika: See!!I asked myself that question soo many times and never found an answer.

Aya: But! ..If u go i will go with you!!

Reika:No! Don't do that because of me!

Aya: *crying*I don't wan't you to go! PLEASE!!!I beg of you!!!

Reika: *sigh* ok but im only doing this for you!*she looked soo sad*

Aya: *wiping her tears away* thankyou!You won't regret being alive!!*smiling*Everything is beautiful!!You won't regret!

Reika: *smiling* maybe...maybe so...

Aya: here let me help you up*gives her a hand*

Reika:thanks *takes her hand and pulls herself up*

Aya: *smiling* here *pulls the curtains open*isn't the light wonderful?

Reika: *smiling* yes..Yes it is!

Learning to say "im sorry"

'2 months later'

Reika: i can't believe i was soo heartless and cruel back then....

Aya: i noe..u changed alot in the past 2 months*smiling*

Reika: your right...everything is soo beautiful when i look...before i didn't care...maybe i should apologize to those girls i was soo cruel to before?

Aya: yea....just be careful and say it correctly. I still think they have a grudge against you

Reika: don't worry....*gulp* i think i'll be fine.

What do you think. Did Reika manage to get along with the other girls? Have they forgiven her?Did Reika go back to her old life?
I'll let you use your imagination to make up the ending! 3nodding





julz92
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    -[Iced Vo Vo]-
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    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 06, 2005 @ 08:09am
    Julz.
    woah.
    I think "Reika" has to look around.
    All her friends really care for her.
    A LOT.
    And would be hurt if she was doing such things...
    is this just a cover story.
    Julzie-pip.
    What's wrong sad


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