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Ehh welcome to my life poems, drawing, stuff from friends


Heart-Broken-Neko
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Peom i written at school
Autumn leaves fall,
Gental winds blow's leaves threw the sky,
Passing a young man sitting agianst a tree,
The winds blows threw his hair,
Lifting it from his face,
A gentle tear slides from his eyes down his cheek onto his hand,
Running along his finger to the tip.
It fell Forming a heart,
Touching the ground Shattering into broken peices of his love for the girl he still loved for years.
She didn't know she was leaveing him with nothing but a shattered heart...






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fox-siren
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comment Commented on: Mon Feb 25, 2008 @ 03:20pm
great poems. ^^

i tried my hand at poetry, but i think i suck...

they r in my journal if u care....

leave a comment or 2 please. ^^

positive criticism is welcome.


comment Commented on: Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 06:16pm
I love it its the best i still wish i could write as good as u 3nodding


**Peace**

Jamie_the_Magnificent_93
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