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Clandestine I'm not sure if i am able to update this in a daily basis, but I'll sure try to share whatever is running in my very crazy mind. :heart:


iIiEsmeiIi
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I'll see you soon [dedicated to my father]
[I made this poem okay? sorry if it's crappy. D:]

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I was five months old when you and mommy left
And that flight was one memory i couldn't forget
And even if you came back each year
A visit could not satisfy, nor stop my tears.

I heard your voice from the phone one day
You told me we'd be together, soon you'll find a way
But when I turned ten, you no longer called
And the reason for that, I was not told

A visit, a letter, I waited for so long
Disappointment came, but my hopes were prolonged
And then you were ill, I was the very last to hear
From pain I cried, losing you was my worst fear

I prayed and I prayed, that soon you'll be well
And sooner or later, with me you will dwell
With mommy we'll be one happy family
Worries be gone, our hearts be filled with glee

And then my darkest day came the second of june
I was unaware I lost you that noon
I was told you'd be gone, forever and ever
It was the hardest obstacle I've ever encountered

I never had the chance to get to know you
To see you, embrace you, and kiss you
I never had the chance to say goodbye
Nor say "I love you dad" before you died

Some time, Someday when we meet again
I'm sure I'll be fine and ready then
To take my chances of getting to know you
And all said promises will be renewed

This pain that pierces my heart, I will endure
One day I'll smile and be happy for sure
For now, I'll do my best to mend all these wounds
so daddy be safe for I'll see you soon..





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Starlike Stereo
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Tue Jul 01, 2008 @ 07:46am


this is a nice poem... cry nice in the sense that it portrays how you feel accurately...

there.. i skimmed through your journal... those were some entries worth reading for. ^^


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