I decided to actually put up the title, since it was in the beta test of the writing arenas, I figure that people are going to see it there, so I just up and made it right. ^_^
I wrote this poem not too long ago. I wrote it for a special someone that I no longer feel has any faith in me, nor do I think this person cares for me anymore. This was going to be a last ditch effort, but I shrugged it off, and instead I'm putting it here. So, have fun and tell me what you think. ^_^ I am very proud of what I wrote, but I love to hear what you think I need improvement on. ^_^
*~A.S.H.L.E.E.~*
A selfish masochist
I want you all to myself
Forever loving you
Let me hear you scream my name
Strip the mask from your heart
You know you want me
A cage filled with dreams and desires
You will know Paradise
Heaven all to ourselves
Two loving Angels
Starry skies radiate down
Demons in a tangle of love
Love me as I love you
I'll give up anything and everything
Just to have you in my arms tonight
Someday I will make you mine
Even though we are now apart
You will forever be remembered
Please, never forget
This love I have for you
Every time I hear your voice
Feel your unkindly embrace
A sword runs through my heart
It kills me to know that you are not mine
I will love you forever
Please, love me
Save me
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[i:6d4ccc37cb]II ~ XII ~ MMIX
You are like a book I've red over and over.
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You are like a book I've red over and over.
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