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Long, short, whatever, as long as everyone that posts adds at least one small fanfic or chapter from a fanfic you made.
Okay, here goes...

Being as there was a frikkin'... I don't know, red demon thing. "Hey, buddy, so your one of them" the demon thing said, in... "Oh, god, Kimmy!" The thing smiled. "Bingo." My head was reeling, mostly because he was still on my stomach and now he weighed at least 100 pounds more than earlier, and also that he was a demon, and that just scared the living s**t out of me. "Get your a** off me, you giant son of a b***h," I gasped through clenched teeth. "Fine, since you don't have a sword yet, I'll give you a fair chance of breathing for a few minutes, before you die," he said while grinning. He got up, and I inhaled a huge amount of air, and started coughing from air deprivation. I looked around and noticed we were in a prairie with nothing around but grass being blown down the wind. "Now, time for you to die!" Kimmy said, and lunged. I put my hands up, like that would do something to protect me. There was an explosion, and I was flung back 100 feet, my right hand suddenly heavy. I stood up, a little dazed, and looked around. Kimmy was gone, and so was everything within a 50 mile radius. I was standing at the bottom of a huge crater. My right arm felt really heavy, and, fearing I had hurt it horribly, I looked down and saw a huge stone sword. "What the..." I said softly, when suddenly a huge flash of light appeared in front of me. I looked up, and standing there was a tall, beautiful girl that was around my age, maybe a little younger. "You the noob?" She said, looking at me with a raised eyebrow, which really irked me. "What are you talking about?" I asked her, looking at her with a questioning stare. She sighed exasperatedly, then looked around, and paled. I mean, like, ghost pale. "Oh, my go... You did this?" she practically shouted at me. "What!? How could I do that? What's going on, anyway? Why did Kimmy turn into a demon? What caused that explosion? How did I get here, anyway? Why am I holding a huge stone sword? And who the hell are you, anyway?" I said, my voice rising in volume with every word until I was screaming at the top of my lungs at her. "How should I know! You should just come with me and ask the Master Commander," she said, and before I could ask her what the hell that is, she had me on the ground and looked like she was gonna knock me out, but before she did, she said, "My name is Kaia Tynte." Next thing I knew, I was out and she was taking me to God knows where. That day was the day my life was changed forever, and my best friend (and later, enemy) would be Kaia Tynte.

There, that's chapter 1 of the first book in the DemCol Diaries.



Although we have no obligation, to stay alive,
On broken backs we beg for mercy, we will survive.
BREAK OUT! I won't be left here,
Behind Closed Doors!

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    sorabain
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    commentCommented on: Sat Sep 06, 2008 @ 08:05pm
    rofl it works.


    commentCommented on: Tue Sep 16, 2008 @ 12:02am
    its a bit confusing. i cant picture it in my head..
    o well, its just my head, i havent been thinking straight bc of skool.
    Hmm...On a scale of 1-10, i'd give it a 7 1/2.
    Could use a little work, a bit confusing, but right now good. Wonder whats gonna happen next...



    SloGoGoMoMo
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    commentCommented on: Sun Sep 28, 2008 @ 03:28pm
    To be completely honest SloGoGoMoMo, I am wondering the same thing...


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