The first two stanza of a sonet i'm writing. Tell me what you think. Any Suggestions?
Two of the lines are short some syallables if you could help me that would be great.
10 I love you more than I could ever say
10 I love you; I think of you everyday
10 I love you; my world is all about you
10 I love you so. I hope you love me, too.
9 To you, the greatest mountian is weak
10 To you, the greatest river is a creek
8 To you, the world is very small
10 To you, no building will ever be tall
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