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Empress Saa
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My poem ^_^
Uhm well it was too big for paint
but
this is
Alterations
by Marissa aka Mari
Sorry for spelling errors..

He raises his hand
and your face flex's left
What just happened?
its imprinted on your cleft.

You give him a look..
like never before
with shock in your eyes
He calls your a whore.

Then he leaves
slams the door shut
your eyes fill with tears.
as you touch your cut.

Its more than last time.
Last time it was brief.
now he has left
has left you in grief.

You start to get up
and walk to the door.
but then he comes back
just asking for more.

you stumble back slowly
as he holds out his hand
he rips off your clothes
and you understand.

You wake up the next day
baring his child
he calls you fat
and you pretend he smiled.

What happened next
was so out of touch
You mind forgets it
it hurt too much.

You took out a gun
and pointed it at him
he dashed for the window
but he wasn't so slim.

You pulled that trigger
he fell with ease.
you stared at him coldly
still clutching your knee's.

This is what happens
in a messed up society..
when people act on
their own anxiety.





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HEY-FREDDiE
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comment Commented on: Mon Aug 21, 2006 @ 07:00pm
Ooo...o.O Wow...


comment Commented on: Mon Aug 21, 2006 @ 10:39pm
Wow Marsie thats deep You did a good job on creating a poem on how things happen for some unlucky ppl 3nodding



Xx_Kitsumi_xX
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i-Rinnii-i
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comment Commented on: Tue Aug 22, 2006 @ 03:12am
OMG MARI YOU COULD BE A RAPPER OR A SINGER!!


comment Commented on: Tue Aug 22, 2006 @ 06:00pm
I sing
but
lol..
rap??
Dog please
you know
it!
;D

I could you know
write a song
for you
Crystal..
A little something like
this:
Big
Boobs
big big
Big Boobs
big
Boobs
big big
big boobs
!



Empress Saa
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bluebloo
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comment Commented on: Sat Sep 02, 2006 @ 09:30pm
wow thats a really good poem what made you think of it ?its so good^^


comment Commented on: Sat Sep 09, 2006 @ 09:05pm
*claps for Marissa*Yay! and I thought I was good lmao



Delta_Li3
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