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My Secret Little Place
This is basically going to be aboue me. In a while im going to post a story im working on, maybe a few poems and everyday problems.
A poem--kinda crappy though...i was bored--
Shh.
Cut off the light and hand me the knife.
Let me stab my heart before you do.
Let me be the one to say I dont love you First.
Come here.
Let me listen to your heart beat.
Its not the same as mine.
Its a differnt pace.
Another love.
Your heart beats for him.
You dont care for what i do.
Even though you know i would do anything for you.
Yet you do this to me.
Cut on the lights.
Look at my body covered in blood.
Look at what you've done.
I stabed my heart in a million places.
And i tried to stop the rythemic beating.
But it keeps on beating.
Why.
It wont stop.
Too many things have been done it said.
It just cant forget.
It just cant stop.
It beats for you.






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smearon
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 26, 2007 @ 12:27am
No!
It's not crappy at all!
It's really good!
Well at least I liked it.


:]


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