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The Deepness


polakita
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Anything

I'm the shoes on your feet
And the heart that beats
I'm the air that blows
And the dirt in the streets
I'm your mom and I'm your dad
I'm even the worst nightmare you ever had
I come in any shape or size or form
I fly with the pack of bees that swarm
I'm the difference between night and day
The cone in the road that stands in your way
I"m undeniable and surely reliable
I'm the car crash that made the opposite driver liable
Can you guess what I am
Because I don't think you know
So just read how the story unfolds
I am the world
Every boy and every girl
The long flowing hair that was once a short curl
I am the sun and I am the moon
I am the hurricane in which your house was consumed
I am the finger in the gold wedding ring
Well I'll just tell you
I am life and can be anything



This is one of my favorite poems that I wrote. I was 16 then. This piece is 4 years old and still existing. emo





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Borg Bardsson
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comment Commented on: Thu Dec 07, 2006 @ 07:21pm
Trzy sztuki ...
Trzy wiersze ...
A ja się czuję jak by przez mój umysł przebiegło stado słoni ...
Coś pięknego smile

Jednyne chyba słowo, które jestem w stanie wypowiedzieć po tej lekturze ...


comment Commented on: Mon Dec 11, 2006 @ 10:00pm
This is very nice...creative mind you have. Still writing these days?



Herr~X~Garvin
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