here is part of my story that I just started, I hope you like it!
She lay there, frozen by the snow, breath slowing down coming short in puffs of smoke in the cold. Tears frozen on her face. "I'm gonna die soon, please get it over with." Kristy muttered under her breath. She passed out.
Next thing she knew, she was lying on a bed in a house that didn't seem familiar to her. She felt her head and took her hand off. It was covered in blood. She didn't know where she was. She shook and got up. A sweet-looking old lady walked in holding a wet cloth.
"Who are you? Where am I?" Kristy panicked.
"Shush, I'll answer your questions later, you need rest now, would you like anything to eat or drink?" She asked and put the wet cloth over the wound on Kris's head.
"Oh can I just have a cup of coffee, please?" Kristy answered.
"Sure. I am Gloria by the way. I'll go get your coffee."
"Thanks, I'm Kristan, you can call me Kris or Kristy. My mother's name is Gloria, it is a beautiful name." Gloria smiled and went to get the coffee.
"I used to have a daughter named that, what a coincidence. Do you need to call a family or someone to pic you up? If you want I'll get the phone... Are you okay dear?" Kristy's eyes watered.
She managed to choke out the words, "I was on my way to their grave when all I remember was a huge truck coming right toward me. They, my parents, died ten years ago from today from a fire at the resturant that my parents owned. A cabinet fell where the door was and they tried to move it but it wouldn't budge. Everyone else got out safe... except mom and dad."
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Hi, I am into writing so I'm gonna put some of my stories on here, I want you to tell me what ya think of them, okay? if you can that'd be great so I know if I need to work on anything at all! Be brutal, lol!
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Friends are friends no matter what but a true friend will always
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Friends are friends no matter what but a true friend will always
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