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my book of poetry poetry written by me, and occasionaly a few by my friends. not exactly very cheerful, but not all are depressing either.


xx Hinoto xx
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Together In Hell


you hold me tight
as i lay bleeding
our time is over
life's short and fleeting

if i say goodbye
my heart will break
yet still i say it
and leave you in heartache

one day i know
we'll meet once more
and so here i'll wait
beside hell's door

i love you so much
i didn't want to die
but together we'll be
in death, you and i


Please tell me what you think of this. I just wrote it, I was listening to one of my favorite songs, "join me in death" by H.I.M.





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khaili11
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comment Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 11:04pm
A little morbid, don't ya think, but creative and poetic. blaugh Nice job, better than i could ever do. sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Wed Feb 14, 2007 @ 11:17pm
Very nice ballad type poem. ~Thumbs up.~



+..Raven Savior..+
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Thejaguar
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comment Commented on: Sun Mar 18, 2007 @ 02:18am
its so sad! crying
so beautiful!
i wish i was as poetic as u!
=,]
wow
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comment Commented on: Sat May 19, 2007 @ 05:56pm
I've read this so many times Anne, and it get better everytime, LOVED IT!
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luv ya
Sarah ninja



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