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this is just a poem i wrote...it's kind of dark...but plz tell me what u think of it

No more
did you feel it?
the pain,
the sorrow,
the blood,
the horror,
the loss?
they did.
and they saw it too.
they saw the life leave
your tortured body,
your soul depart.
but now that is no more.
for they think that you are gone.
they think that you are no more.
but you stand there behind them,
screaming,
asking why.
why they ignore you.
why they don't seem to see you.
but though you don't
want to admit it,
you know the truth.
you know why you are invisible.
you know why they can't hear you.
you know that you are
nothing more than a lost soul.
you know that you are no more.