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Oh castitas Lilium
Okay I'm going to try my luck at poetry but mind you I'm not very good at it...

well here it goes...

Killing from the inside out

water from tears..
sadness I've felt them before.
Never knowing what goes on behind that forced smile.
Never knowing her thoughts for that is how I live.
Useless imposters...fakers if you will that never call
Unaware that he has family elsewhere other than his world.
He has two daughters.
Both that miss him inevitably.
One can't let go.
The other hasn't known enough to even hold on.
He abandons them unaware that it kills the mother inside.
He slowly kills the one that can't let go inside.
She no longer wants to wait by the phone.
She no longer is willing to hold on.

She still cannot for the ties to him are deep within her heart, buried.
Her name is Arielle.
She can no longer wait for him to keep his promises.
She screams inside tired of being let down.
She doesn't want to do what she does to her sister.
Blows that she does not deserve but are forced upon her.
It kills her inside
every blow laid upon her beloved sister.
She wants to do this to her oblivious father.
Water from tears...
saddness, both of these I Arielle have known too well.





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    Oerba Fang
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    commentCommented on: Thu May 24, 2007 @ 04:12am
    stare The worst I've ever read! stare OMG I'M BECOMING SIMON! gonk Nah, I'm kidding it was ahight. blaugh


    commentCommented on: Thu May 24, 2007 @ 08:00pm
    he he thanks ^^ but like I said I'm not exactly the greatest.



    Likaru
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    Ariathanx
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    commentCommented on: Fri Jun 01, 2007 @ 07:21pm
    it was good, i don't do poetry, cuz, im gonna be a singer not a p***y. lol jk of course, but yah that's basically how i feel about it

    go my band, "until december!"!!!


    commentCommented on: Fri Jun 08, 2007 @ 02:48pm
    good luck withyour band then but yea thanks for the rating.



    Likaru
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    God_alpha
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    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 09, 2007 @ 03:45pm
    pretty good


    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 09, 2007 @ 04:05pm
    He he thanks ^^



    Likaru
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