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Well, I have been thinking about starting to write a different story that just randomly keeps popping into my mind. I wish to know what my fans(if I have any) think. So I am posting it here. The main character would be a girl who is named Ichi. Her parents are forcing her to act and dress like a boy to hide her brothers death. She is the princess of some forgein land and she puts up with it because it is the only reason her parents saw her at all. A little poem of Yunie's day: "Again the day dawn breaks and I must greet it with a smile. My love will forget about me in a while. The world is sad, the kiss is sweet. When will My shining knight sweep me off my feet?" What do you guys think?
Yuna_YRP · Thu Jan 20, 2005 @ 05:14am · 3 Comments |
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Welcome to chapter 11! woot.. some secrets will be reveled that arent in square enix's story but remember this isnt theres^-^ but these characters are theirs!
i backed into the lockers... tidus came closer and whispered into my ear... Tidus:"i am going to tell you brother's real name" i opened my eyes wide.... "you are?" He nodded Tidus:"i said if he ever did anything in front of you then i could tell you his name...." i nodded "alright then tell me"i taunted him... he leaned in... Tidus:"his name ... is...." He grabbed my love handles and tickled me! i tried to stop him but i couldnt! i just giggled and laughed the whole time "be Serious!"i said between giggles. Tidus:"alright, his name is sue." "sue?!" Tidus:"yeah and he didnt want you to know it." "well then sue and i will just have to get to know eachother." he stopped and the smile dissapeared from his face. i looked at him "im kidding!"and i kissed him Tidus:"good! if you weren't i would have to ....."he trailed off... he was staring at the entrance to the locker room... i turned to look there... It was him! he was standing there with roses in one hand and his other holding some chocolates. he looked back and forth at me and tidus... he turned and started walking out... "Aydin!"i screamed(Authors note:its like the name aiden but its pronounced long a and then din) he turned around and looked at me... tidus stared at me open mouthed. i ran to aydin. "Aydin e hajan vunkud oui e ymfyoc ghaf oui fana drana, e zicd druikrd oui vunkud sa! yht drah e vuiht Tidus yht ra dnyjamat fedr sa frema e fyc y cissuhan yht fa fana rybbo dukadran! es cu cunno..."(aydin i never forgot you i always knew you were there, i just thought you forgot me! and then i found tidus and he traveled with me while i was a summoner and we were happy together! im so sorry...) he came over to me and grabed my shoulders... he looked deep into my eyes.... Aydin:"Yuna e hajan vunkud oui yht e hajan femm! e muja oui yht ryja cehla fa fana meddma... e fydlrat ymm ouin dneisbrc yht vymmc... bmayca lusa pylg du sa so muja."(Yuna i never forgot you and i never will! i love you and have since we were little... i watched all your triumphs and falls... please come back to me my love.) he kisses me... tidus steps forward and pulls me away from him.. he turns me to him. Tidus:"who is that?" he points to Aydin. "that is aydin my best childhood friend." Tidus:"then why did he kiss you?" "because he says he loves me..." Tidus:"well who do you love?" Aydin:"Yuna?" "uha susahd"(one moment) Tidus:"stop talking like that! and dont talk to him! yuna dont you love me?" i looked at the ground... Aydin:"Yuna? fryd ec kuehk uh?"(yuna what is going on?) i looked up at aydin and tidus.... i burst out of tidus's clutch and ran out crying... Tidus&Aydin:"YUNA!!" i ran and ran.... i made it to the temple in besaid by the next day.... i sat in frount of my father's statue... i heard footsteps so i went inside the chamber of the fayth... i slipped my hand over a knot in the wall and it fell backwards and replaced itself.. i landed in a dusty room... it had spheres all over! i picked one up and played it... it had lady yunalessca on it... she was talking to her lover.... another came in.... it was just like the scene with tidus and Aydin... i played another one.. it was my father... and my mother.... Aydin and his mother were there.... he was smiling and playing catch with me.... i picked up a newer one.... i played it.... it had me in a wedding dress being held in the arms of tidus... we were comming out of the chamber of the fayth... oooooohhhh! this just made it harder.... i couldnt think... i went to the back of the temple... i tried to summon bahamut's fayth.... i prayed.... ~please come... please... i know you can... please i need you...~ he came... "bahamut..." Buhamut:"yuna? why did you call?" "buhamut i have two men fighting for my affections... actually almost all of spira's men are..." i shook my head "but two of them in perticular are ones who want my affections!" Buhamut:"i see... well have you told them of your predicament.." "no but they wouldnt understand.. they love me.. and i love them both the same ... one is a childhood friend and the other is a friend from a little while ago..." Buhamut:"well tell them..." i stood up "thank you" i ran to the airship and waited in the cabin.. i know they will come.
Woot chapter 11 man school takes up too much time! chapta 12 soon
Yuna_YRP · Sat Jan 08, 2005 @ 02:01am · 1 Comments |
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Well...today I saw Yumi...and...I am tired of fighting with him... I want to be his kitten again....if he will have me...But i just want..it all to be the same again....Well sorry for the delay but here is chapter ten.
hey these arent my characters but of course this is my story.. these characters belong to square enix
~chapter 10~ i watched the ball zoom around the court.. barali scored! i did a little vitory jingle in my head this is gonna be easy..i thought oh no! he had the ball he was comming straight for me.. i went to the goal and everyone rushed forward to stop him.. barali got the ball and scored ten more times...
the game continued like that until the last quater where i had been looking around for a spot to rush when they scored.
"well it was 19-1" we were walking to the airship for a nights rest untill tommarrows matches.. Tidus:"yeah! those were some great shots barali!" Barali:"thanks.."
i sat on the bed in the cabin thinking about what had happened... when someone came up behind me and put their hands around my eyes ???:""hi there guess who?" i spun around "tidus why are you playing around?" it wasnt tidus....it was him! "whhho are you! what do you want! how did you get on this ship.. leave me alone!" ???:"yunie its me! dont you remember me?" "i never knew you!! stay away from me!" ???:"yunie... common you know me.. i know you know me..." "STOP CALLING ME THAT!" a tear fell down my face.. he walked over to me... ???:"well then goodbye for now yuna" he hugged me and kissed my cheek..
i sat down on the bed again what was i going to do.... i laid down... i heard someone come in... tidus came and laid by me.. Tidus:"you do what you think is best yunie.." he fell asleep.. i cuddled into him and fell asleep inhaling his scent and wrapped in his arms..
i woke up and it was light outside... tidus was pulling me out to the cabin to eat.. i was thinking about how i should go about playing in today's matches.. i decided the best thing was for me to stay defender.. then no matter who we played we would win..
we found out our first matches ... tidus was facing brothers team... we were facing some team made of bums.. ~great..~i thought ~they are gonna ogle at me...~ i hopped out onto the street and walked around passing time with tidus and barali.. they let me window shop.. "oh wow! this is cute!" i had found a shop filled with dresses for formal occasions.. i turned to them "please?" they looked at eachother and i grabbed their hands and pulled them in... i tried on about all the dresses in the store, barali and tidus found ones they liked and had me try them on, amazingly tidus and barali both found this dress that was beautiful! it was a long flowing one.. light pink... the sleeves long too all the way down then ended in a kinda tent thing.. i tried it on and showed the boys... they both droped their mouths... i spun around... "do i really look that good?" Tidus:"yeah!" i turned to the lady that was helping us "i will get this one.." tidus and barali stepped forward to pay for it.. i changed back into the blitsball uniform.. i checked what time it was... "guys we gotta go! tidus's match is in two minutes!" i grabbed the dress and ran to the blitzball stadium.. tidus jumped into the sphere and was there with only seconds to spare.. brother looked dissapointed... tidus got into a huddle with the rest of his team and planed what to do... (authors note: spiders are evil[sorry just had to say that] and my brother is mean) tidus was rusher.. he got the ball and swerved behind brother(the other rusher) he got a goal in the first minute yes!
brother came when tidus didnt have the ball and tackled him square in the gut.. i stood up ........ the crowd had stopped cheering... the teams stopped playing.... "tidus dont fight back!!!!" he looked over at me and nodded... he whispered something to brother... brother's eyes went wide.. he shook his head and talked calmly to tidus... tidus folded his arms and swam to his side of the court for a replay of the ball.... i looked from tidus to brother.. tidus winked at me and at the end of the game he motioned for me to follow him...
i jumped into the sphere and as i did people gasped.. i swam over to tidus and followed him to get out..
"what was that about?"i said as i panted Tidus:"You'll see..." he stepped closer to me... and.....
Thats the end of chapta 10 chapter 11 comming up Brothers real name next chapter! and.. maybe.. the name of yunas childhood friend
Yuna_YRP · Thu Jan 06, 2005 @ 04:34am · 0 Comments |
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these arent my characters they are square enix's but this is muh story
~chapter 9~ we landed at luca and stepped off.. all of spira was there!
i stepped up to the mic.... "everyone.. something extrodanary will happen soon.." i turned to tidus.... he smiled... he was so innocent... i turned back and started my speech "to all who ever wanted a chance at my heart...." a couple of men moved around.. "there will be a contest... to win it.." i winced and the crowd roared.... this was going to be hard.... "but the catch..." they all stopped... "is that if i win i get to choose..." i moved so that gippal barali and nooj could explain...
i decided not to go back to the airship... i grabbed tidus's arm and ran to the old blitzball stadium.... he looked at it... eyes blank... i used my spheregrid and changed into a blitzball player.. i walked over to the owner "can you fill this up for me and my friend?" OWner:"sure miss yuna" he went off and did that i turned to tidus "now teach me how to blitz!" he smiled Tidus:"roger!" we went to the ring that floated along the outside filled with water.... Tidus was explaining the game... "wont we need more players then?" he tought a bit Tidus:"sure i guess if you want some more.. we can get some..." i giggled "i was just making sure you dont have to play one on one.." Tidus:"oh! no you never play one on one..." the sphere was filled up now.. i jumped into it... tidus followed with a blitzball under his arm... we spent the rest of the day practicing blitzball moves.. tidus said i did good... i think he was lieing... lulu found us soon... so she made us come back to besaid.. tidus told us about some of the games he had when he was the star of the abes. it was fun talking about our childhood.. i told him all about my father and kimarhi
i had to be snapped back to reality when it was time for the battle... ~this is gonna hurt..~ lulu found some old warrior clothes from the machina war.. they fit perfectly! it looked like rikku's thief outfit... but it was made of all leather. i looked at myself in the mirror... was i really gonna do this... tidus came in... i giggled he was wearing a machina war outfit too... it was like the blitzball uniforms... but leather like mine... Tidus blushed when he saw me.. Tidus:"you look... good!" i blushed "its my new look.... so ready for the battle?" he nodded i walked over to him and kissed him on the cheek "i hope you win" i walked out and climbed on the airship...
at the luca stadium tons of people had showed up... i hope this isnt fight to the death... i'll find barali and ask him.. "barali over here!" he walked over.. everyone was wearing clothes like mine and tidus's.. Barali:"yes yuna?" "is this a fight to the death?" he laughed Barali:"of course not! it has become a blitzball tornement!" ~im glad i learned how to play..~ Barali:"people will be put onto teams and fight against others then at the end the best team will do a one on one match" ~one on one! there has never been that before~ Barali:"we had the offical blitzball representitive create a one on one.." "all this for me?" Barali:"yeah everyone wants to win you.."
slowly people would get numbers to be on teams... i got on a team with barali... i rushed to see what team tidus had he was the first game! i grabbed barali and brought him with..
tidus's team was ahead by 6 i whistled the way he taught me.. he looked over winked and blew me a kiss... he tackled the man with the ball and scored i jumped up and whistled no one else did anything.. barali saw what i was doing and joined in .. soon everyone was cheering for the team they wanted to win... tidus's team beat the others 38-25
"yeah! you did it!" i jumped up and down Tidus blushed and pushed his hand behind his head. Tidus:"it was nothing.." Barali:"you scored the most out of all your team.." "yeah! can you teach me that one shot you did? where you went out of the sphere?" Tidus:"that shot? that ones easy i can teach you right now.." he explained how to kick the ball up and how to get yourself out of the sphere Tidus:"then while your upside down look at the goal and kick the ball as hard as you can!" he kicked the air. they called my team to the arena "gotta go now, cheer for me" i kissed his cheek and headed off to the arena with barali Tidus:"you know i will!" i sat on the outside of the sphere waiting for them to start the match... all the other players were in the locker rooms.. but since i was the only girl they gave me acceptions.. i walked around the outside looking for tidus.. he waved at me and i smiled back waved then blew a kiss... the buzzer rang and i fell back into the sphere for dramatic effect.. i had pulled some strings and got it so that rikku gippal lulu wakka kimarhi and paine could get tickets into the games. they were sitting by tidus and were waving.. i had the ball and everyone was blocking the guys who were comming at me... although they were trying to win me they were rough still.... i threw the ball up and performed the shot tidus taught me! i could hear tidus whistle. we won! we had killed them! 24-0
"i cant belive i did that!" i was walking to get some lunch with barali and tidus Tidus:"you actually did the shot right" i blushed "barali blocked 3 guys from getting to me!" Barali:"well we had to get that goal..."
we talked about the games and some of the possible people to win.. barali seemed to want to win just to get me away from the other guys out there... wakka had entered the tornement for that reason too... luca was filled once again with talk of blitzball... just like before... this eternal calm wont last... it would end.. soon i bet...
next game one of us had was me and barali... against...no way! "i am not fighting against him! i cant!" i was with my teammates finding out our next challengers.. ????:"yuna its okay! you dont have to fight thats what alternets are for" "but if i use an alternet i cant get back into the game i forfeit" Barali:"who do you not want to fight?" "someone from my childhood..." they all got in really close.. "he was an old crush of mine... we lived in luca together..." they stopped figiting "we lived next door.. my mother and his mother were friends ..."
~flashback to yuna's childhood~ i was playing outside the concert hall singing pretending i was one of the famous singers and summoners.. he came up behind with with two ice cream cones.. he was short but taller than me, he had blach hair in a shag-like way... and deep blue eyes.. our parents close behind him... they stopped and stared at me singing... he came up to me and put the ice cream in my face... ???:"you might need a microphone..." i took the ice cream and licked the drippings.. "you guys were watching?" they all nodded... ???:"you were good!" "thanks" the parents started leaving... he offered me his arm and i took it.. we walked arm in arm licking ice cream and skipping... ~end flashback~ "the last time i saw him was just before my fathers pilgrimage.. after that i had kimarhi protecting me and auron and sir jecht would visit."
~flashback to yuna's preteens~ i was sitting on my porch... boxes were all around me... people were moving boxes around.. a young man with black hair and sea blue eyes peaks around the corner of the house.. "*hic*hello...*sniff hic*" ???:"your a mess..." "dont rub it in.. i dont want to leave luca.. its my home that i have been out of...." i looked up at him he had roses in his hand and held them out to me.. i took them.. "thank you..." he looked at me.. ???:"your welcome yunie.. well will i see you around after you move to besaid?" "i hope so.." he kissed my cheek and ran to his house.. i blushed and held my hand on that spot.. ~flashback~ "so you see why i cant do that!" my teammates thought a bit... kinoru:"ill take your spot and you be second defender!" "that could work.." barali:"what position is he playing?" "rusher" Barali:"whoa! okay everyone keep him away from yuna.. you heard the discribtion"
i was out on the sphere ring again... "tidus!"i whistled he waved i started walking around it... i hit something... like a beam and i fell into the sphere..
i woke up and the game was about to start.. i swam up to my new position barali was the rusher and he came over to me gesturing to ask what happened.. i said i was relaxing...... he shook his head and swam back to the head... i looked around the sphere... there he was! he was looking at me... i looked away and became stone-faced and acted like i didnt know him...
well chapter nine was a little longer than i wanted but hey i liked it.. so chapter 10 comming up!
Yuna_YRP · Wed Dec 29, 2004 @ 01:22am · 1 Comments |
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this is my story not my characters they are square enix's
~chapter 8~ tidus fiddled around with some stuff in the engine room... "how do you know how to fix this?" Tidus:"i spent some years studying airships and machina.... like cid said.. 'because of the tabbo we are running around in the dark" i laughed "yeah thats cid alright.." Tidus:"alright go tell brother to kick it!" i ran onto the elevator and pressed the button for bridge... it was great having him back... i stepped out of the elevator and ran to brother... "tidus says to kick it!"i yelled as i ran.. he kicked the controls.... i sighed.. "that means start it.." he blushed then sat down and pressed the starting button.. it started! i jumped up and down.. tidus walked in covered in oil and sweat.. i ran over to him and wrapped my arms around his neck "thank you tidus... thank you for everything..." brother called on the speaker for everyone to report to the bridge.. shinra ran in and looked from the oil covered tidus to the blinking controls his eyes got big Shinra:"yyyyou fixed it!" Tidus:"just a little tweaking..." shinra started questioning him on what he did and a whole bunch of stuff i didnt know. they talked for a little then brother spoke.. Brother:"everyone the airship is fixed and we are headed home... everyone here?" i looked around.. nooj..barali...paine..shinra...barkeep...brother..buddy...me ...tidus.. "wheres kari?" kari ran in with a bunny fiend in her arms..panting after running in. Kari:"im here i wanted to get a bunny to show my friends when we got home..." Brother:"well everyone to your stations!" i walked over to the elevator with tidus nooj barali and paine.. shinra and kari went to his pannel. brother went to the controls and buddy to navigating. when we got to the cabin we sat at the bar. barkeep seemed to have gotten there in a matter of seconds after brother had spoken. "lets have some food barkeep!" Barkeep:"yesh mish yoona!" he went into his back room... i turned my chair around, leaned back on the bar and closed my eyes tidus looked over at me "i cant believe i am going home... we have been here for awhile... wonder how rikku is..." Tidus drank a little of his drink and spoke to me still looking at it. Tidus:"rikku is fine.. she and gippal were worried when you guys dissapeared.. she actually said brothers real name too..." i looked over at him with one eye closed.. "so what is it?" Tidus:"huh?" i sat up and turned to him "whats brothers real name?" Tidus:"i am not going to reveal it unless it is an emergency" he sipped a little more.. "awww common cant you tell me?" i acted cute and pouted... he didnt see Tidus:"sorry hun but i cant.." "alright" i yawned "im a little tired tell barkeep ill eat when i wake up.." i stood up, walked up the stairs and fell onto a bed. tidus came up soon after and when he was half asleep i got off my bed and laid next to him. he opened his eyes, looked at me then put his arm around my shoulder. i fell asleep inhaling his scent.
i woke up and found myself alone. i sat up and saw him comming up the stairs Tidus:"morning sleepy head..i got some hot cocoa" he lifted the mugs he had in his hands. "morning .. thats great." he sat at the end of the bed and handed me a mug. ~this is how it is supposed to be, falling asleep in his arms, waking up to hot cocoa..perfect..~i thought. i sipped the cocoa.. "where is everybody?" Tidus:"we arrived at besaid about an hour after you fell asleep..so i stayed inside with" i nodded. "so ready to face the world?" his turn to nodd. he stood up took my mug and set them both on the side table. he turned to me and picked me up. i wrapped my arm around his neck. he took me off the airship and stepped onto the ground. lulu and wakka were waiting with vidina. wakka stepped back and lulu almost dropped vidina. Tidus:"hey wakka lulu, whose the baby?" they were speechless. Wakka:"how?when?who?what?" "tidus came back for me, everything will be explained but first," Brother:"we are having a contest to find out who wins Yuna!" lulu looked at me i stepped in front of him "and if i win i get to choose!" lulu looked at me slyly she knew what i knew.. they wouldnt hit me... they were fighting to win me... "so we need to make an announcement to spira.." barali nodded Barali:"and i know where, the blitzball stadium in luca!" everyone including lulu and wakka got back on the airship. while we were heading to luca tidus explained how he got here. ~Tidus's flashback~(authors note:this will be told from tidus's perspective but then it will go back to yuna's after the flashback) i was falling after jumping off the airship... seeing yuna look at me that way had killed me... so i jumped before i could do anything... i landed in the water and that is the last thing i remember... i woke up and i was at this island...(the island yuna got lost on last chapter) i swam to the next island which happened to be besaid... i got some clothes of a traveling salesman but it happend to be a tux with a mask.. i thought it might be perfect so that i could stay watching over yuna and break it to her gently.... i followed her and the gullwings... durring the time i wasnt following them i worked with an al bhed fixing ancient machina one day she was at the pond... where we.. had... snap out of it tidus...i thought...she already has another guy i bet... i decided to help out.. i jumped out and killed the evil octupuss and caught this kid who was stuck in its grasp.. another guy fell into the pond... i found yuna there every day and one day se heard me and asked me for a kiss.. i gave it to her too.... it was as magical as the first... i followed her every day.. one day she dissapeared.. i went and talked to rikku who made brothers real name slip when i said Yuna had gone missing... she helped me find the place where i could track where the airship went.. and i found out she had dissapeared on the same island i had... so i found her about to be gored by a huge fiend and dived to push her out of the way i grabbed her hand and lead her out of the cave and up the cliff.. i turned to her and took of my mask.. she gasped "hi there"i said she put her arms around my neck and.... well the rest of that is personal so you dont need to know do you? heh heh heh
later we were running back to the airship and i met a kid with a rat..(Shinra:"mouse!" wink mouse whatever... then i went inside with her and met nooj barali and brother... we then decided to have a contest to win her... then i did some fiddling with the ship and fixed it.. i was talking to yuna in the cabin when she decided to go to sleep.. sleep sounded good.....so i followed her and laid on a bed.. a couple minutes later yuna came and got on my bed next to me.. i looked at her and wrapped my arms around her... i woke up and saw that she was still asleep i went down and asked the barkeep for two hot cocoas.. when i headed back upstairs to wait for her to wake up she was sitting up on the bed.. i said goodmorning and gave her hot cocoa and we got off the ship and thats what made us here... ~end flashback~ Tidus:"so thats what happend.." i nodded "sounds like you" i nudged him.. he grinned..
chapter 8 done woot! chapta 9 on teh way!
Yuna_YRP · Tue Dec 28, 2004 @ 02:02am · 0 Comments |
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Okies For the X-mas season I am going to post three chapters! (dang that means I will have to start writing...) Here is one of them! Thank you guys for reading!
hey chapter seven here! again these arent my characters but this is my story characters owend by square enix(i know i spelt that wrong)
i ran back to the airship.... i couldnt believe it... i was amased that it was him i hadn't seen him for two years.... ~flashback~(authors note:this isnt the igsact dialoguge i am making it up) ????:"i am sorry yuna i have to leave" i hug him "i love you" i turn around and he hugs around my neck then he runs and jumps off the airship. ~end flashback~ tidus was alive and he was here with me....... running by my side.... no wonder i could stand him and not the other guys....
i ran into the clearing.... shinra was outside playing with his new mouse keg.. they found the little stowaway in the bread room... so thats what they feed him now.. the bread leftovers..
tidus wouldnt come out of the trees "common....they will be happy to see you.." Tidus:"but i havent talked to anyone except you..." "common... please we need you.. you can save us.." he came out.... shinra looked up Shinra:"yuna!!!" he stopped at the sight of tidus Shinra:"who is that yuna?" "this is an old friend of mine...he came here to find us and he is going to get us off this island." Shinra:"oh... yuna guess what i taught keg! i taught him to jump through this little hoop!" he ran back and pulled me with him. i grabbed tidus's arm. he followed. shinra put keg down on a log, grabbed a ring and held some bread at the other side of it. keg jumped up through the hoop. "wow thats great shinra!" he smiled. "im going to go inside now..." i go inside and hear yelling... i cling to tidus as we walk into the cabin... brother and barali are having a row yelling back and forth... brother:"yuna would never go for a guy like you! your trying to get to the head of yevon and make yourself powerful!" Barali:"well why would she like a bum like you.. working with a child and your father? plus she is your cousin.." Brother:"uhh...." he stops and looks over at me entering with tidus... barali looks over too... they have their mouths wide open.. nooj is the only one who wasnt yelling and he walks over to tidus.. Nooj:"hello i am nooj leader of the youth league, and who might you be?" tidus stood there staring at nooj's hand for a second.... Tidus:"my name is tidus.. i am Yuna's old gardian.... and..." brother and barali cut him off Brother&Barali:"Who is he? how did he get here? yuna whats going on!" Tidus:"who are they yuna?"he asked innocently ~oh no now this is gonna get ugly~i thought "now let me explain everything and no talking... you can ask questions when i am done all of you" i looked at all of them and turned to tidus "these are my good friends Brother and Barali...." they glared at tidus. i turned to them "this is my old boyfriend type figure tidus... " they started to try to talk "something happend to make me think he was never comming back but he has been watching over me the whole time " and when he heard i went missing he came to find me.." i turned back to tidus... "brother is the leader of the gullwings and rikku's brother... he flew the airship when you escaped from home.." Brother became solem... i continued... "barali is the leader of new yevon.. he wants to team up with the gullwings to help make spira better and get rid of any dangers..." barali sat up straight and proud... ~that was easy~ i thought nooj coughed.. "oh! nooj intoduced himself.. the youth league wants to make spira better by using the spheres but letting the people do it and not yevon.." i thought... "so any questions?" Brother and barali looked at eachother Brother asked the question Brother:"are you two(he nodded at tidus and me)still together?" i looked at tidus and he looked at me... Tidus:"if yuna wants me to... i will always be her guardian" barali stood up... Barali:"why dont we duel for her! winner gets yuna!" Brother stood up too.. Brother:"yeah i agree!" Tidus:"well what about any other men who want yuna.. they should get a chance too..." i stood up i was upset they thought i was a prize.. they were wrong.. "and if i win i get to choose my own man" they looked over at me... Tidus:"roger!"tidus walked over to me Tidus:"so where is the engine room on this thing?" Brother:"what is he going to do to my ship?" "hes going to fix it..unless you have a problem..." i gave him the most adorable look i had... he didnt say a word "right this way tidus" i slipped my arm into his and walked out the door.. i looked over my shoulder and barali and brother were steaming..
chapter 7 over! wow i think that one was the hardest to write i have writers block!*shock* oh no! well next chapter: the battle! the old gangs responce to tidus's return! and maybe even brothers real name(if i can find somewhere to put it in) well chapter 8 comming right up! woot!
Yuna_YRP · Tue Dec 28, 2004 @ 02:00am · 0 Comments |
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this is chapter six everyone enjoy and remember that these arent my characters they belong to square enix!
we decided to explore the island a little... groups of four would go. that way it was more likely that they could handle the fiends first up it was buddy brother barali and nooj when they got back shinra loaded everything they told us into a map. if we continued this we could have a map of the whole island! when it was mine and paine's turn kari wanted to come too.. so we let her. we were tracking behind the airship's current place. we ran into a couple of bunny fiends but we learned they were easy prey. we killed a couple while she wasnt looking and put them in a bag where we were to keep meat. no one ever ran into the shapeshifter fiends anymore...
when brother went out on duty he happened apon their little space on the island and so we avoid there now
as we started out after the bunnys paine heard a noise. i grabbed kari and held her tight covering her mouth. a shapeshifter..... i could tell by the way it was moving a slide then a thump(author's note: no one knows what the fiend looks like but it is a bull with lion paws and crocodile tail right now) like a tail and legs. aparently it liked the bunny fiends too... kari's eyes widened and she started trying to say something in al bhed. i shushed her. we were backed up against a tree. paine had her sword out and was standing in front of us.
it came into the clearing saw us and started comming. it was right in front of us... its paw raised to strike! "move!" i threw kari to the side as paine jumped to cushion her landing. i ducked down. it narrowly missed my head. i ran to the next tree. "paine start heading back with kari!" it swiped again and i ducked. this time it caught my hood and tore it off. "hey! thats my hood!" it looked at it questioning what it was. then it tossed it aside. i ran into a cave with it right behind i reached the dead end i was up against a rock wall now.... what was i going to do.... as it was getting ready to headbutt me with those horns i closed my eyes. this was it... i was going to die... i opened my eyes.. it was 10 feet away and i was in the end of a cave it started running.... 7 feet... 5 feet.. i closed my eyes bracing for the impact... then... i felt myself be takled to the ground. someone rolled me over and over. the fiend ran into the cave wall. i opened my eyes... that masked man had saved me... how did he get here? before i could open my mouth he stood up and grabbed my hand. we started running out of the cave. we got out and climbed to the top of the rock. the fiend came out and looked around then gave up and left... "what are you doing here? how did you get here? how did you find me?" he put his hand over my mouth....
i looked at him.... he took off his hat .... he started to raise the mask off his face ........... i gasped ????:"hi there"
well thats chapter 6... woot.. chapter 7 commin soon!
Yuna_YRP · Tue Dec 21, 2004 @ 06:23am · 1 Comments |
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well chapter 5 here! woot! remember these arent my characters(though i may have tweaked them) they are square enix's and i made the story(with some help from my friends and their ideas to make it better!)
the fiend leapt out of the trees into our clearing shinra's eyes were huge with horror and he clung to my neck "edc ymnekrd drao femm bnudald ic"(its alright they will protect us) i whispered into his ear he nodded barali was right in front of us doing all he could to stop the fiend from getting to us.
it was huge! like a bull but with a lion too! and it looked like it was hungry.
but all of a sudden it changed! a fiend that can change shape? it was now a large red and black snake! shinra held tight and it zoomed around barali. i turned my back to it and ran for the airship. barali:"YUNA! Stop!" nooj took the time that the fiend was chasing me and he stabbed it in the head and pinned it to the ground. shinra was horrified as he looked at it and watched it change to different animals but he laughed when it was part of ever animal it had been that meant it was dead. shinra ran over to nooj and gave him a hug. Shinra:"dryhg oui" nooj:"what did he say?" "thank you" nooj:"your welcome" (AUTHOR'S NOTE:shinra could talk english but when scared he tends to go back to al bhed)
we started heading back to the airship with shinra getting a piggy back from nooj. paine was at the head making sure no fiend was there and me and barali took the back.
barali:"you shouldnt have run like that yuna..." "well it distracted the fiend and made it die didnt it?" barali:"yes but you could have been hurt" "so shinra was our goal and i was going to make sure kari had her brother back." barali looked at me stragely. "what?" barali:"you care about people so much its amasing, you would give your life to save someone you didnt know?" "yes i would but i do know shinra" barali:"if i were in danger would you help me?" "depends on what kind of danger..." barali and i had stopped moving and everyone was way ahead. barali looked at me Barali:"danger of falling for you" ~oh no not another one~i thought "listen i dont want a guy to like me" Barali:"because of that one who left you? Yuna i wont do that to you!" i started walking to the others. he stopped trying to get me to like him. "we are friends barali" i was almost up with paine now "thats how it will always be"i said over my shoulder we waited for him to catch up and he stayed behind nooj for the rest of the way i stayed up with paine.
when we got back to the airship i had shinra again. "we are back kari!" kari jumped out of the airship and ran to her brother kari:"shinra you had me worried!" shinra:"its okay i had yuna with me she wouldnt let anything happen to me!" kari nodded"yup thats yuna!" i blushed kari took shinra inside while he told her about the evil shapechanging fiend.
barali stayed outside so i would bring him his food "you sure you dont wanna stay inside?" barali nodded and took the soup bowl i had in my hands barali:"thank you but ill stay out here. i dont want them to know what happend and brother doesnt like me much." "oh thats just brother, everyone is happy we got shinra back!" barali set down the bowl and stood up. barali:"yuna just try me out?" i didnt understand him till he stepped to me and kissed me barali pulled back and looked at me. barali:"so?" "shinra cant fix the ship so we are stuck here... so you are okay i guess...." he lightened up "will you come inside now? i dont like you out here by those fiends." barali:"sure." we went inside and partied all night.
(another authors note:the ship is in a lake and thats why it isnt tipped over biggrin ) everyone slept in the cabin. shinra and kari had to share a bed. barkeep slept wherever he usually does and brother and buddy kept watch. everyone had to have a turn watching the airship for invading fiends. it was a pretty normal night and in the morning everything was the same. barali kept hitting on me but i tried to ignore him. i made us some pancakes for breakfast. they were gone quick.... "we are going to need meat you know?" nooj:"kill another fiend and eat it!" shinra&kari:"eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww im not eating fiend!" paine:"well that food your eating now could be a fiend" they dropped their food. i glance at paine and giggled "its not how could you cook meat into a pancake?" kari:"if barali made it there would be many things in there i wouldnt know about!" everyone started laughing including barali. i think this would be a fun time.
well that was chapter five chapter 6 on its way! (oh and tell me if you want me to improve anything or just throw something in there!)
Yuna_YRP · Tue Dec 21, 2004 @ 06:21am · 0 Comments |
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Chapter 4 of my Final Fantasy Fan Fic |
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again these characters arent mine but the story is
~chapter 4~
rikku came back the next day and said she was in love "gippal?"i asked she shook her head no "what?!Who!?" Rikku:"i met him at a party gippal and i crashed" Paine:"figures"she muttered
we spent the rest of the day talking about old crushes paine had alot of them which suprised me and rikku
we talked until gippal came for rikku. they were going to mt gagazet for awhile.
nooj and barali showed up for a chat with me about the gullwings they wanted to know who would get the spheres about yevons past i didnt want to talk to them so i blew them off alot but now they had caught me.
i walked to the cabin where barkeep set up a table so we could talk brother knew it was something to do with the gullwings so he came too
all of a sudden buddy came on the speakers sounding scared paine yuna come and fight this monster its attacking the ship! we got up and bolted out of the room followed by brother nooj and barali brother ran to the bridge and the rest of us went to the deck and suited up for battle.
it was a huge dragon-like fiend! i had never seen anything like it! i changed into black mage dress sphere.so did paine but when we tried to attack it swipped at us. it knocked all of us down and then went for the ship...
i was unconsious and when i woke up barali buddy nooj gippal paine kari and barkeep were all looking at me i jumped back and fell of the rock where i had been laid. "where am i?" they all looked at eachother paine:"we dont know" barali:"we are on some island and if we dont get off it soon we will be in big trouble." kari sat on my lap kari:"shinra is gone...where is he yuna?" i looked down at her "i dont know kari but lets find him..." Buddy:"yeah and soon he is the only one who can fix that new system he put on the ship!" i stood up and set kari down. "well first lets make a base here at the ship and we will need food and a fire" nooj:"yuna we have all those things on the airship" barkeep:"yesh we have mooch foods and shupliesh" so we werent really hopeless. "well then kari you know how to use your brother's spheres?" kari nodded Kari:"paine does too!" paine nodded "ok kari stay at base with one and paine come with me barali, and nooj " everyone helped us suit up and then we headed out. anytning bad that happened kari would see and go tell brother or buddy
"okay where do you think he could be?" paine:"i dont really know but we found you in a pond a little way from the airship."
"great....." they trecked for awhile then stopped at a pond "kari, anything happening there?" Kari:"nothing really brother made a mess cus he was covered with oil and he sat on barkeeps table so now they are trying to clean brother and the table" "okay thanks kari" we heard a rustle in the bushes. i turned aroud quickly "who's there?" shinra came stumbling out of them "SHIRNA!" i rushed over and picked him up "what happend to you? fryd rybbaht du oui?" Shinra:"y veaht, ed yddylgat sa, ed ec lussehk drec fyo"(a fiend, it attacked me, it is coming this way) "edc ymnekrd shinra tuhd funno ouin cyva fedr ic" (its alright shinra dont worry your safe with us) i grabbed him in my arms and turned to see barali nooj and paine looking at me with huge eyes and their jaw dropped down. "what?" barali:"the summoner who defeted sin can speak al bhed? blasphamy" "its not blasphamy! my mother was al bhed yeah and you knew that so i could at least speak al bhed!" barali looked down barali:"yes i knew...." nooj:"what did the boy say?" "shrina said that a fiend was comming this way and it attacked him." something was in the trees around us circling the pond. barali:"get back yuna and take that boy with you." i went to the waters edge and they kept me safe "careful here it comes!"
well thats chapter 4 check out chapter 5 comming soon to see: will the fiend get yuna and shinra? what does the fiend look like? where are they? how will they get home? and maybe we will find out brother's real name?
Yuna_YRP · Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 06:41am · 1 Comments |
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