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 Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:55 am
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 11:54 am
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((*bright smile* time for an abnormally long post...it will sound a little confusing as I am commenting on every post I missed in order...so you might have to go back and do some reading to fully understand anything I might be saying...
....anyway...*quick nod* I came and went to California...to Disneyland and California adventures...were you in the area?...I am sorry we could not have made further plans, but the time you posted that I was probably already gone...*a little confused* Waaaa?...I don't think my friends would hurt me...that's a strange concept...*and the shrieking started again as she was once more being tickled, rolling away now as it could be surprising how often her friends did things like this to her*.....*she nodded to Maes* I actually am going to try it with my mule account, but never with this one, I have my own random style....but...you kinda do....Edward may be better at alchemy...but Russells' taller.....hehehe...*her sister was making it a habit to joke about the shortness of Edward lately*...and Fire?...you actually look like a demon from Saiyuki...minus the wings, angelic guitar...and seal slippers...I can see the character holding a dead cat though.....
*she looked at the Edward cosplayer* wow...that took some time...although the arm should not be on top of the shirt....*clapped for the Envy cosplaying* cool!!..but I would love to know where our Edward ran off to...*She listened to Mr. M's crying, about the death of Scar, about how Al went through such pain, and she was now rocking back and forth from the result of such, upset to hear such things* yes...this series is going to be one of those heartbreaker ones...*listened now to Fire's life and what was happening, making note of everything and then a little confused*...Saiyuki and YYH do not go together...but seeing Shadow paired with that baka water kapa would make my day....*personally would shoot the man someday if Sanzo did not do it for her*..but yes Fire...be careful about the calling thing...I don't want you to get upset...*worried about the rp now*
I am so sorry!! I was gone for a week and I am posting there next!! I am quite sorry about that!!!....*she knew about Kasumi being asleep, she knew were all the characters were...although Adenine was already out of the car in the rp...people should take care to read all of her posts in the rp and not skip through them...this comment directed at certain people...then the shock came at Mr. M being sick, running over to hug him and rather worried* please be ok soon...I get sick really often but other people should not be so....*winced at the posting part* I am sorry...but I am back now and I am posting...but...if Ed does not claim the character in seven days time from now, it goes back to Maes here.....and that's official...*killing herself for being gone so long* I am sorry!!! I did not mean to be gone for so long but it could not be helped!..*she listened to cosplaying now*...wow...I actually have got three convention days all planned out for Nan desu kan in Denver...people should try to come to that, it's big....
I though, get to be Kanna of InuYasha, Tohru of Fruits Basket, and Izumi of Fullmetal Alchemist...I look exactly like (and my friends tell me I act like her, although she is so much better then I) Tohru in real life, can pull off Kanna easily...and Izumi can be done with a little more effort to look quite real....
Kanna:
Tohru:
Izumi:
*she could only nod softly with the comments on Fire being Roy* I can see that...Jezi's right....*she listened to Shadow decieving everyone and sighed* I fear seeing just what she's going to do to little Ade....and Ty of course is wide open for assult, being an attached soul and all...*huggled Ade at the mention of Scar killing everyone, as he had already given Ade a stern warning about becoming a State Alchemist*...only Envy would taunt Scar like that...not Shadow or Kasumi...*held her head, as she actually liked yaoi, just not with Roy and Ed, so she would not touch Scar's little lecture about it*...I have no comment on that...all of you have such different opinions on that....so how about we move past the romantism and such because its so conflicting.....but I suppose this concludes the long post....and finally to move onto the rp....and see about the errors that were interpretted from not reading my posts all the way through....))
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 12:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 12:52 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 5:17 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 5:32 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 5:35 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 9:44 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:05 am
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((*waved softly to Mr. M, the usual sunshine smile on her face* good morning!...and...*listened to where he was* with traffic and distances we probably would not be able to see each other anyway...especially with my girl scout troop and the rushing around the parks...*she shook her head at the Scar baiting* he would always logically think it out, come at a proper time and avoid manipulation, and still get the captives back...that does not work out...*threw a paper clip the size of her nail at Fire for getting bad ideas* anyway...yes, I know it was confusing, I warned you...I basically had two screens up while reading one, replying on the other...so you have my play-by-play comments on everything that I missed...*no one here had seen her really para-rp yet....she could get 17 paragraphs and not miss a beat*...cosplaying is always fun...staying in Kanna's character is hard, as I supposedly do act like Tohru and life is in general exciting for me....*glared at CN* They should show us more of FMA faster so I can see Izumi more...
but...*nodded about Fire's height problems*...yes...my sister is going to be Edward, and she would be a good one too...she is getting the arm made and it shall be grand..and her uncle is coming as Al, who is tall, broad-shouldered, and he has a suit of armor that with a few modifications in the forge he owns, can be just like Al's...only a partial day showing of course...but with my big sister taller then I, by an inch or two, it makes me an Izumi shorter then Edward...*still rather worried about the height problem, a problem she could do nothing about yet*... I have hair that goes past my back, but it's only dark brown, with a little spray dark enough to do Izumi, but I can't do really exotic colored characters without wigs.....*poked Fire* you should do Roy.....that would be great...*she actually liked guys with long hair, but that was just her*....well, Fire should already have a Hawkeye in the group, right?...but you could also be her with ease.....*listened to the denial of doing Hawkeye* too bad...but I thought the double accounts were good, it made rping easier....
*she nodded quickly* yes, I am going...we might just run into each other...did you go there last year too?...and I don't travel so much...usually only inside the state....I live an hour and ten minutes south of Denver, and then 25 minutes north of Colorado Springs...that should tell you right where I am...and then of course my sister is about to go to college two hours north of Denver....*glared at her sister for leaving*...but yes, NDK is grand and enjoyable for all...I was star-struck last year...this year is should be better with a cool building...*twas being driven there as her parents would not even let her near the steering wheel of any of their cars*...yes...I keep forgetting to get the prereg form in...I have to do it really, really soon....
Now, for the part you all have been fearing......Nu....I sentence you to...Constructive Critisism!!!!
First of all, you have probably read this else where, but Al is required to use circles in his alchemy, not using just hands....nextly...you should try to fit a few more descriptions into what you say, give us more depth behind Al, as he actually is a deep person..tell us what he feels or see's on a matter....maybe include the sounds around you, or the fears Al has for his brother and himself..and don't be sparing with your adverbs and adjectives....if something can have a description, even just one word before it, then that's better......*end rant now*))
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Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:42 am
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Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:11 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 9:38 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 9:59 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:37 pm
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