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songwriterscramp Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:47 pm
Ok, I know this is the last thing you wanna spend your weekend doing, but I have this paper that I just finished writing. It's 12 pages double-spaced. It's on ecotourism, and frankly, it's very academic. It's for my major, anthropology, not my minor, English. Which explains a lot. wink I love my major, but papers like this make me unsure.
Does anyone wanna read it and let me know what they think?
Let me know, and Ill send it to you. And be eternally in your debt. Or at least until I consummate that debt. How?
I don't know.
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 9:25 pm
See this? I want it. Chaos will get back to you after he's determined whether or not he's sick. ninja Donations luffed.
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Everlasting Chaos Vice Captain
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songwriterscramp Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 9:27 pm
Chaos is not allowed to be sick. stare
Bad Chaos. No sickness. Its not good for you.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 7:29 am
I would help it if I knew much about anthropology but I don't. I would still like to read it. mrgreen
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songwriterscramp Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:18 pm
It doesnt matter about the content, I know I did ok on that. I just wanted someone to tell me if its readable razz
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 2:58 pm
I wanna read it, though I may not finish if it doesn't interest me, sorry. sweatdrop If I finish it, it means that it is really good.
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songwriterscramp Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:09 pm
Youll probably find it boring. sweatdrop
God, I really am a nerd. crying
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:40 pm
I found it very informing and I did read the entire thing(Except the sources). I guess you don't like ecotourism at all in it's current state. I didn't realize the negative impacts of it but now I do know.
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songwriterscramp Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:18 pm
Yay! Any suggestions to make the paper better?
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:32 pm
Only thing I got is some seemingly repetitive statements on a few things and I don't think you've added enough on the good side of ecotourism. It seems your only looking at one side without letting the reader know that there is a flip side. I'm not really good at judging papers like this because I never do so, so what I say my hold no grounds. sweatdrop
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songwriterscramp Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:54 pm
Can you give me some examples of repetition?
And thats the kind of stuff Im looking for, so no worries.
As for the showing the good side bit, the point of the paper is that there isn't really a good side, lol. It's not supposed to be unbiased, as long as it's backed up. I'm supposed to be taking a point of view and arguing it. So yeah, I can see what you're saying, but I think it's ok in that way. Thanks though.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:02 pm
Sorry, I didn't make a note of it... sweatdrop It's not overly repetitive that it matters.
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