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Didn't know they were from a series, so I guess I'll try again there. And if the growing character is a problem, I'll just try another character, though I never intended to outright copy skills or only be used in rp with the other. I just made them to progress over time, with anything of value that they learned being influenced by other characters. Their skills aren't made to copy, really, but to see how someone can evolve over the course of an rp given their experiences.

I agree about the Keepsake rank thing, and it was a bit misleading to say that it grows in rank. I'll just change that, since a book really doesn't "rank up" when you write in it.

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I kind of stink at drawing, but I tried to draw the characters on my own. Tell me if that's just ametuerish, and I'll replace them with other pictures that I found online.

Gave Seth's Keepsake a rank. It's more of a journal that writes itself than an object for use in battle. Just lets him record things for later reference to build new techniques, rather than affecting his own skill in any way.

Both characters are more of the "student" than the "mimic" types, if the wording is helping any on the profiles. I promise that the only thing that will make them different than any other character that has to go through hardship and training to develop unique skills is that they haven't done any of it yet. I hope that other characters in the rp will influence their personal growth, just as people would in a real life situation.

And, to prevent the problem of self-rp'ing, I'm seperating them completely after a few posts. They may meet back up when various groups rejoin, but until either one has developed on their own, I plan on keeping them completely seperate entities, albiet ones that know about each other's existance.

[edit] I've also got their basic skills planned out, though it may have to change slightly by what they see and what can be practiced. I'll send that to you for approval, as well.

Reverie -I am sorry, but if you yourself have no intention of keeping a character that you created, then I see no point in reviewing it, let alone approving it. It is one thing to develop particular attributes of characters, such as skills, abilities, magics, weapons and then allow someone else to use them for the use of their own profile. It is will quiet another to give away a whole profile. Allowing people to see short cuts here will only result in short falls.

Hana -approved.

Sub Hero - There are many ways to develop a character in an rp, but most of all it comes with time and experience. Allowing others actions to influence your own in various ways. Just like all walks of life. What I am trying to say is this, I have nothing against progression, but your way of going about your character seems a bit off to me. Your characters can naturally develop without the need of addition skills saying they can do this. Why not focus in on the thief aspect of the first and more so on the nature based abilities of the second.

Onto the second characters keepsake. Everyone has a set amount of Seishou born within them. Think of it like bowl of water. Once your out, your out. After wards you have to start tapping into other supplies, such as magic or even life force. Please give some further consideration into the keepsake. Learning is Learning, Doing is Doing. All I have to say.

Sub hero - Why not just set the skills you sent me into your profiles? I mean, they are all find and you can expand on them all. If not, your choice. Either way, approved. Now get off my lawn.

I see. Well, as long as you know it's there. But, I'm still going to have to RP as her. Avalbane is Breena's Second in command and she's going to be playing an important role in about...*Checks watch* Yikes! Right now! I'll continue this discussion later.

Hunter Ikari

In need of re-review on his Keepsake, which was changed. I haven't used it or mentioned it yet, so that won't be a problem. The other one...didn't like. Please let me know if this one is okay or not.

I'll change it back to the old one ASAP, then.