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 Posted: Mon Nov 14, 2005 3:06 pm
This poem is called killers of a student
Why do you make me suffer?
Why do you love my pain?
You're all a bunch of killers!
Loving my fights in vain
Why must you laugh at me?
Why must you try?
Always trying to see
If you can make me cry
Can't you let me go?
Let me die in peace
I would love it so
If I could hide at least
Why do you make me suffer?
Why do you love my pain?
You're all a bunch of killers!
Feeding on my pain.
You attack me, Slash me
With many words and phrases
Why cant you see, why cant you see
I'd rather die than look into your faces
Maybe that's the reason
That no one likes me
Maybe all you say is good true
But I was too blind to see
Why do you make me suffer?
Why do you love my pain?
You're all a bunch of killers!
Killing me by names.
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Posted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 3:09 am
Okay, this started out as a song, so if there's some rythmic irregularities, that's why.
The Greek's Honey
Can't you see
You're everything
That's more'n I care to think?
And when I close my eyes I see you,
I see your face form in the clouds
I don't want to take a breath.
Every dream deserves a nightmare
Every greeting needs goodbyes
Every story has its ending
Every song must have a final note, a final bar.
I'll wait and walk all lengths to see
You hear the sweet, sweet melody
Of what you mean to me
I can't walk away
I can't bear to say
Goodbye
Every moment that I wait
Causes my heart to break
I'm waiting for that second try.
You don't know how I see you
It lifts me up into the clouds
When you're in my mind, all the time, I'm walking on air
And I can't wait
But I have to
For you.
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Posted: Fri Dec 23, 2005 9:58 am
Yule breaks and brings together
Complications in cold weather.
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Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2006 11:37 pm
You are the first people I'm showing a poem to. I hope you like it.
In a crowded Hall
In a crowded hall
I stand alone
as the people pass me by
In a crowded hall
I think to myself
how can I be alone?
In a crowded hall
the noise is silence
and the beating of my heart is all thats there
In a crowded hall
I stand alone
as the people pass me by
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 6:38 pm
Wow. All very good. Mine might be the worst punishment ever reaped upon this guild however, I guess it wouldn't hurt...
You and I and the Starry Sky
You lie close to me,
As we watch the stars,
Your smile as you turn to look at me and,
I think to myself,
How nice to be just,
You and I and the starry sky but,
When I reach for your hand,
It's gone and,
I know you're just a dream,
I won't let anybody know how much I miss you tonight,
How I long to see your face beneath,
This bleak moonlight.
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 12:29 pm
Well, don't you have a lot of confidence in yourself. It's not that bad. Probably could be better, but definitely not as bad as you make it sound.
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 2:57 pm
Um...thanks...
Fire
Fire rips the night,
Like stitches of red on purest black,
Consuming all in sight,
Yet, the flames flicker and die,
From the house a last one leaps,
From the ashes the sole survivor,
A little boy creeps.
Night! Take no prisoner,
As a thousand souls depart,
You are not satisfied for,
One remains apart.
You know not his name,
And you do not really care,
You feel a burning hate just because,
He was there.
This boy has no father,
No home to call his own,
He has no mother,
No money for his life,
He will only be left with memories,
Of this terrible day...
Yeah. Two words: IT SUCKS!!!!!!!!! okay so, it's not that bad but...
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Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 6:27 pm
eek Dying thread? NO!!!!
Heh, sorry.
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 4:01 am
Wherever you are, wherever you go,
Do not eat the yellow snow.
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 11:15 pm
VERY GOOD advice. I suggest EVERYONE follow it.
I do not care if it's in a cone,
I do not care if it's on the ground,
I will not eat snow that is yellow or brown
=^^=
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 9:47 am
"Madness running around me,
I hear them screaming loudly,
Blood and fear,
an opening here,
a place to be left."
It's new work I've made so don't complain, my old work was better.
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 10:23 am
"Dawn of Sarrows,
Dawn of days,
Mourn for tomarrow,
Mourn for today,
Staring madly,
In a creepy way,
fearful Monsters,
on any day."
This is my older work so it's better. All my old poems are better.
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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:41 pm
Hope's survival.
Pain is Faith.
A forgotten stride.
A waste you'll need.
Older Potencial.
Deadly nightares, you see a wraith.
The broken armcair, what a ride.
A broken bone, and you will bleed.
New work. from me...
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Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 10:11 am
*Walks in undaunted by the strangers and sits down in the midst of things*
Hello, you want to read one of my poems? I wrote it three years ago but I still think it's the best poem I have ever writen, here:
The Darkness comes:
I am helpless,
Though faced before
I am defenseless.
Through all my years
I have never faced
A more terrible thing
Then the Darkness.
The Darkness breeds
In the dead of night,
To face the morn
With a foul smell.
And yet I wait,
But why I wait
is beyond my comprehension.
The Darkness smiles,
It's a terrible smile.
It reminds me
Of horrors long past.
It informs me
Of horrors yet to come,
And my death in the near future.
The Darkness jumps,
I dodge away.
I stumble,
Then I fall.
I see my life
Right before my eyes,
I feel my death.
The Darkness stops.
I can't think why,
I just made a mistake
That would mean my death.
I hear a noise and think
"Is there anything the Darkness fears?"
Not that I recall.
The Darkness turns
And then he runs.
What could scare him so,
That also wants me to live?
I slowly get up
And turn around
To see, the Light.
You like?
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 12:48 pm
I like a lot of what i've heard, keep up the good work guys.
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