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 Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 4:26 pm
Hey all and welcome to "The Gaian Writters"
A guild for all writters on Gaia to come and share anything they have written, and maybe even enter it into one of our ranking contests!
So if you have any questions you can PM either me or Draco_kingofdragons
The room you are in right now is called the Coffee House.
This is where you can share your poems with each other and tell what you think about them.
So grab a cup of coffee, pull out your poem, and have fun!
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Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 4:36 pm
This is one of my latest poems. It's not one of my best but it'll do for now. It's called "Special One."
Aren't I the special one.
Standing all alone.
All my friends with there's,
And in the end I'm alone.
Aren't I the special one,
All my friends are here.
What's worst of all they'll pass me,
Without a second glance.
Aren't I the special one,
With all the idiots around.
They'll step on my stuff
Then they'll do it some more.
Aren't I the special one,
Seeing the girl I like.
She looked at me and smiled,
Then continued with her friends
Aren't I the special one,
Standing all alone.
With all my friends around me,
And none to say "Hello".
I'm saving my best for the contest. *porse glass of coffee then sips it* AHH! that's hot! gonk
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 6:16 pm
*gets cup of coffee and blows the steam off it*
I'm kind of new to Gaia, and the guild, but i think your poem is very good!
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Posted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 7:01 pm
*takes another sip* Damn!!! still too hot. Oh, thanks.
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 4:54 am
She sits in the corner looking at a pad of paper. A cup of coffie sits infront of her and a pencil next to it. She picks the coffie up and takes a drink then lifts her head so ay what she thinks about the poem. It was good. It gave the world a chance to walk in your shoes. If you want to cool that coffie down put some cold water in it. She lowered her head back to the notebook infront of her and the coffie in her hand. She took another sip of her coffie then set it down.
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 1:46 pm
biggrin biggrin biggrin Miss Anti-social now I see.
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 2:14 pm
Me no. Just looking at a poem of mine.
Surrounded & Alone
Here I stand with my friends.
Yet something isn't tere.
Something sits in the dark,
Waiting for something more.
Deep down I know.
I kno the name.
The name of the person.
The person who waits.
Deep own I feel when he crys.
I feel when he falls.
I feel when he's laughed at,
And when he loves.
Why do I see the kid no one sees?
Why do I feel what only he feels?
Why just me and no one eles?
Cause I am that kid.
-Mel- She looked up at the end finshing her coffie.
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 4:09 pm
I really like that poem Mel.
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 6:24 pm
Thanks. Yours was cool too. Like you said though. I'm saving the best for the contest. She got up and got herself a cup of black coffie. She put some cold water in it then went back to her seat and set down.
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 7:01 pm
I have never written a poem in my life... heh...
Let me take a crack at it
Pain, in the form of blood dripping from my eyes
You said we could come back to this time
The time when all was perfect and love was still there
Believing, and breathing, I must of been overwhelmed
Now none of that is true, how could you do this?
Why do I feel the pain from inside?
How is it that I must survive?
I don't want this fate, I want it to die
Make my life great, and let me forget,
what i now regret
Stop, you musn't go on
Now, I fill with hatred untill,
Drip, the hatred is now tears
It falls to the ground with much of my life
Lets not forget the entity of my existance.
Please don't forget that I loved you.
Please don't regret that you loved me
We had one chance, and tried to break it into two,
but now I am alone, but not you...
But now...
Though the love was so great I left it all back
Its now jsut a few from what was so much
I bottled it up, and squeezed it small
Now its just two words, forming in the head.
What are these two ******** You.
*starts to laugh and tear*
oh my god i'm am so ghey... that has to be the worst poem ever written...
*Chugs coffee an d walks out*
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Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 7:34 pm
It was pretty good for his first time. Mel whispered to herself and took a sip of her coffie.
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Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 4:50 pm
Pain and death all around,
soldiers falling to the ground.
Planes crashing, people die,
In the ashes is where their bodies lie.
Fog fills the streets as people run,
Angry citizens know war wont end 'till justice is done.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 10:42 am
*Comes in and sits down at a table with a coffee* I think Soul Tear's poem is very good...I find it hard to believe it was his first one, for a few reasons, but hey...nonetheless, it was really good. *sips coffee*
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 6:01 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 8:19 pm
KollegeKitty *Comes in and sits down at a table with a coffee* I think Soul Tear's poem is very good...I find it hard to believe it was his first one, for a few reasons, but hey...nonetheless, it was really good. *sips coffee* a few reasons? if one of them is me starting this guild... i only did that because i wanted a place to try out my lyrics for my band and since i have only had my heart broken once, i never really had a reason to write....ever (except the massive hatred i have for about 90% of america and other places on earth)
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